First off, your novel is amazing. The use of emotions and trauma create such a realistic feeling that I haven’t seen or read anywhere else, and I don’t think I will read anything else like it. I have finished reading the first volume, and though there were a pretty large amount of spelling/grammar errors, they did show up less nearing the end of the volume. I am hoping that it will get better with the spelling/grammar in future chapters. I absolutely love the characters and how they show such realistic emotions and behaviors, on top off hope each character works through their own trauma or how they don’t work through their trauma, which just furthers the realism. I do think the world building aspect of the novel does need some work, though I’m not entirely sure in what, it just feels lacking; I can’t quite put my finger on what though, sorry about that, I know tha isn’t the best objective criticism, but it’s what I got; though I’ve only read the first volume so it might get better. I do like how consistent the updates are with at least one or two chapters a day. I love the story and the characters, I look forward to reading more.

Overall a novel that you could binge. This review might state lots of complaints but ill remind you that if I took time to write such a long review, I loved it to the point that I am willing to spend enough time typing my measly gripes. Writing quality is kinda flawed mostly due to an abysmal amount of spelling errors. I can't even calculate the number of times 'barely' became 'barley'. But there have been lots of improvements as we come to the chapters released these days. I don't see half as many errors compared to the beginning. The narration style is odd, to be honest, Beginning was third person, Then it had shifted to first-person, and then finally evolved to something sort of like first-person crammed into third person(FL point of view). But I enjoyed this and am impressed with it. I would say take a shot, read a few chapters to find whether it fits your style. Also, Author-san if you are reading this, I would like to suggest you stop pasting the last few lines of the previous chapter into the next chapter. Updates as far as I'm concerned are really good and steady.14 chapters a week is good and although the length of chapters is on the shorter side, I guess it makes up with the number of chapters released. I won't say anything more about this mainly due to me just binging 200 chapters in one day. The plot is good objectively but it's not a 'nice' story. The intro will be quite dark and disgusting, Even me myself almost dropped this novel due to the intro but I gave it a chance and I would say it didn't disappoint me in the least. It's very fictional with very very low amounts of reality. Mostly felt to me like reading a Chinese XuanHuan novel. If you dare mix reality in this novel, you will find yourselves with humungous amounts of plotholes. Also, I could say that the plot had changed from being 'extremely dark' in the beginning' to something that could be 'enjoyed by anyone' when it nears the present releases. In the end, I could oversimplify it as a journey of a person from a psycho to a god(world-shattering kind..). Now coming to Characters... There had been without a doubt lots of memorable personalities but I would say character development has lots of nice, as well as bad moments. First would be our protagonist, Her character at the beginning which was completely intolerant towards humans had become something entirely different when it comes to chapters 200+. I won't speak much more on this to avoid spoiling but I loved the entire character development. Now talking about other characters, Some of the vital support characters got dumped midway in the story and there was no side story nor anything of that sorts to remind us those people even exists now. I hope they come up in the future as side stories... Now about the world background, the Magic background was modified mid-story. also, many other kinds of world information were modified mid-story. Nothing about countries or politics nor factions were given much importance, Not barely enough information to visualize the world. It's 200+ chapters...at least try to explain more about the countries and the world she lives in... Now, that's all folks, Don't drop this novel reading the first two dark chapters, it gets really better 100 chapters+. The Author has been showing lots of growth and I would say that I'm looking forward to how this entire stuff is going to turn out. Thanks for reading this long and boring review, It makes me happy if anyone has read this review to this point! Thank you!

First of all it is a great novel with one of the best fighting scenes I have read on Webnovel 1. The writing quality is very good 2. The first volume had more of world building and introducing the characters. the pace isn't to slow and not to fast 3. The character design is my favourite on this platform you couldn't do it better in my opinion 4. the updates are almost daily with exception on holidays ore on one or two more occasion however you can expect stable updates 5. The world background is also good described and not to complicated

At first, I really liked the story, it has a slow development which allows greater setting and development of characters without exaggerating too much in the descriptions and, although the protagonist is powerful is not to the point of completely overshadowing everyone else giving a good content. However, the only thing that confused me is that the current cover doesn't relate to the story yet. In addition, due to the history of the index, I have a regular post of chapters, and I gave a note a little lower in world development because so far there hasn't been much since the mc hasn't left its "initial environment". As for the grammar, I have no idea if it's correct or not because my native language is not English and I depend on Google translator - through this tool everything is apparently readable for me.

It was pretty interesting at first and the character development was good with the mc but the pacing is so slow and the world building is just awful(as far as I have read).

i have to say this story was something i thought wasnt going to be that good but the author had reached beyond my expectations. i really love this story. i really recommend reading it. It is absolutely amazing writing skills 👏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

This novel is amazing. Yes, it starts off with slightly bad grammar and a slow story, but after chapter 15 or 20, everything is fine. The story is cool, descriptive and engaging. The intense fights keep you on your toes while the egoist attitude of the mc is more than welcomed. It really is great, just had grammar at the start with few a minor few plot holes. that can be easily overlooked.

I will be able to die content if the author finishes this book if not il haunt the author till the die they die .

overall I like everything about this, the only thing I have a problem whit is that the world-building is a bit slow. also, I have spotted a lot of grammar mistakes even in later chapters, they can be ignored but they usually set me back while reading.