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the Pain of Power

okay, this is my first story, and the first time i have ever tried to write a story like this. If you have something to say to help me improve the story (without changing everything) i will gladly try to implement the changes, i will talk this as a chance to improve my writing skills and styles

neko_meow · Fantasie
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Chapter 2: Meeting the system

When she opened her eyes she was no longer in the room of darkness but on a small piece of wood, in the middle of the ocean

"You have to be joking, the ocean....REALLY! what is there in an ocean besides things that can EAT ME"

As she was angrily ranting on how unfair it was to wake up in the ocean on a piece of wood with absolutely nothing else a soft but robotic voice sounded in her head

"hello, welcome to Dreon, what would you like me to call you?" the voice seemed calming to the girl

'what is this thing?' the girl thought surprised at the new addition to her head

"i am the special Quest system, i am sure you and me will get along swimmingly, get it?"

it seems like whomever made the system has a thing for puns.....horrible ones at that