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The Exalted Evil

This is my first Fan-Fiction and I will Definitely complete it, please vote with Power stones. Here is the Synopsis: ===================================== It's a shame. It's a shame that I haven't achieved anything with my life, no job, no family, and only crime. Crime never pays people say, crime is evil people say, but for me, it was an ecstasy. I was born into an evil family, with a very despised bloodline and I died a death deserving of it. My name was "Saint Adrik The Terrible" and my reign of crime was stopped the first time I decided to trust someone. My girlfriend for 16 years betrayed me and turned informant, and I died a death where I was poisoned with a hallucinogen and then later fried in my hallucinations. It turns out that my father raped her mother and she was technically my half-sister, I guess I can check incest off my list, right? ===================================== Please go to my profile and give me a like there, please give constructive criticism, and reviews like: "I don't like the story", "a waste of time" will be deleted, if you want to give a 1-star review, please explain the details properly. Thanks, Onii-Chan.

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6 Chs

6. Multiple POVS and the Legend of the Legendary Cucker.

=====Hermione POV=====

Harry Potter is a Dark Lord, he has been one since he was 8 years old. How do I know this?

Well, I was his object of torment for all my life, all the tortures, the pains I went through. All of this just because I fell in love with him. Then I peacefully died at age 69, I was old and wrinkled and he was the same as he was 42 years ago, he had mastered death. I was at peace when I died in his embrace, while my spirit was leaving my body, I saw him cry for the first time, he confessed his love to my dead body.

While I was at the train station, I met a deity of some kind, he offered me to go back in time and correct everything. To remedy my mistakes and to make him fall in love with me. And this time I won't fall into the machinations of either Dumbeldore or one Harry James Potter.

But I think the deity made a mistake, I think he sent me to a parallel timeline because I didn't have any childhood friends. But this time I have a friend named Noah King, he is considered my childhood sweetheart and from the memories, I received from the 14-year-old Hermione, he is madly in love with me. A friend who she considered as someone close to her heart, someone whom, if my Legillemecy is correct, is a pawn of Dark Lord Dumbledore. The poor chap is so Loyal to him that he doesn't even know.

I swear that this time there will be no mistakes, I know Harry Potter as the back of my hand, and I won't allow him to cause much evil in this timeline. But if he takes me by force then I will have no other options.

=====3rd Person POV=====

*Boom* *Hzzzz* *Loud buzzing sounds*

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Everyone falls from their seats and kneels on the floor, the invisible pressure too much for them to bear.

*POP*

"Ha feels abysmal to be back on this train, but what can I do?," Says Harry in an exaggerated tone.

"Oh look, everyone is crawling out of their cabins to greet me, am I this popular?" he says to no one in particular.

"Stay kneeling for some time, I am enjoying this for sure." Hadrian turns around and tries to find an empty cabin.

*Thud*

"Out of the way bitch, if you try to block my path again, I will kick you in the snatch again," Hadrian kicks a girl between her legs and moves on to another cabin.

=====Hadrian POV=====

'Body turn on the charm/allure, also after I gain some knowledge on Occulmency, start building shields for me passively.'

'Oh, before I forget, make sure the men are not attracted to my soul broadcast.'

"This cabin is mine, and if anyone tries to enter it, I will snap your arms, tear them from your shoulders and stuff them in your ass, and before any of you get bold, experience some more fun stuff."

'Body transmit some scary illusions to the souls of these children, make them terrified to even approach me.'

'Now let's see what I can do the rest of my train ride here.'

I think that I have understood the source of magic, and if you guessed it, then yes! it is one's soul. It is the ability of the soul to interact with reality and alter it. There is no such thing as mana core or mana pool, it all depends on the exhaustion caused by the soul on our physical body, the more stamina, and endurance we have, the lesser mental exhaustion, hence the ability to perform more powerful magics.

What I have understood by all this is that the reason Dumbledore and riddle are so powerful is that they know how to perform rituals, and while performing magic enhancing rituals, they may have simply been performing an endurance enhancing ritual.

While being low-key and all is good for the protagonist, being low-key isn't my style, my style is more Kamikaze compared to pussy MCs.

=====Hermione's POV=====

'What is that ungodly presence, it is as if someone is pressing a mountain on me, being the slave of Dark lord Harry Potter, I have resistance to all types of mental magics, but in front of this I am Vulnerable.' Thinks Hermione while kneeling on the floor.

'Must crawl out of the cabin and see the one causing this, things have already changed too much since my arrival.' All three friends somehow crawl out of the cabin and see a person standing in the hall.

"Harry?" Shouts Hermione but not a single word comes out. She turns to see Noah with an infuriated expression and Ron with a look of jealousy.

'When did Harry turn this handsome? And what happened to his rule of being low-key, is he really the Harry Potter I know?

"Stay kneeling for some time, I am enjoying this for sure." Yep, this is definitely him, but he is excluding a certain type of charm which is inexplicable to me.

"Harry Liste-" *Thud*

'Did he just kick me in my cunt?' *Shudder*

'Oooh, how I have missed this feeling, he stopped torturing me after I reached a certain age.'

"Out of the way bitch, if you try to block my path again, I will kick you in the snatch again," Oh yes daddy, show me my true worth.

'I think I just orgasmed, thank God I have learned to cast wandless banishment charms.'

'Moving on... I have to meet him as soon as possible and I have to meet him without these buffoons.'

=====Noah POV=====

'Does he think of himself as Dumbledore, no one has the right to make me kneel, maybe Dumbledore, but that child has just pissed off the whole school with this single stunt. And if they all march in there to kill him, I wouldn't be surprised.'

'Oh my God, he just kicked Hermione in her private place, you son of a bitch! I'm going to kill you. How dare you touch my Hermione, its as if he didn't even recognize her.'

But first I would have to meet Harry Potter and assess how much of a risk he is to magical Britain.

=====Ron POV=====

'The almighty Harry Potter, he thinks of himself as the shit. I have suffered all my life due to him, and I have finally gained a chance at a do-over, to take what was rightfully mine. All the fame and Hermione should belong to me, but instead, I was killed by him in our seventh year when I was trying to get close to her. This time I have to immediately take her virginity and make her mine.

It would have already happened, but this new son of a bitch popped up, he is Hermione's friend, how did she even make a friend besides us and he probes my mind on a daily basis. What he doesn't know is, that you don't become friends with Dark Lord Harry Potter without having Mental protection and the understanding of Mind magic, so as a fun game I show him fake images of me and Hermione having hot and steamy sex.

But first I would have to meet Harry Potter and see what he is on about, he was never like this, he was always low-key.

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*Knock* *Knock*

"Come in you two, and who is the third buffoon?" Harry asks as his 'friends' enter the cabin.

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT MATE? HOW DID YOU DO ALL THAT?!?!," Ron asked calmly.

"Harry, don't you remember Noah, he is my childhood friend and is in the Ravenclaw house, he has helped us a lot in recent years," Hermione says as if indignant.

"Don't you remember me Potter, you weren't this arrogant when you came to beg me for help?" Says the boy in a huffed tone, almost as if outraged.

"Hmmm... Can't remember, he is irrelevant anyways, plus don't call me Harry anymore, speak out my full name. Call me Hadrian. Also... Bitchboy! if you send another mental probe towards me, then you can kiss your life goodbye." Harry says while menacingly looking towards the irrelevant peasant.

The irrelevant peasant flinches and averts his gaze.

"Now get out all of you, I don't have time for useless chatter." A pressure descends on the remaining three, and the boys scurry out.

"No... wai-," Hermione tries to talk to Hadrian.

Hadrian releases the pressure from her and signals her to sit in front of him, he also commands his body. 'Body try to portray her emotions by reading her soul, and give me their exact description.'

'Extreme Lust'

'Loyalty'

'Fear'

'Love'

'Oooh, I have already got myself a candidate for my Pussy collection, from the signals that I am receiving from her...'

'Body also scan the emotions of the boys secretly listening outside.'

'Oooh this is a love square, she is after me, the peasants are after her and are either extremely furious at me, or are extremely jealous of me.'

'I know! I should make them experience the Legend of the Legendary Cucker...'

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A/N: So yes, there are already two time-travelers and one reincarnator. I am just trying to write something interesting and unique. I have also thought of the end of the two boys, the collection of the harem, and how to handle multiple POVs, I think I did a good job today. Leave some comments on how I did, also give me a profile heart.

There will b an R-18 in the next chapter.