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The Ace

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The story of a boy overcome with pain, that suddenly isn't. ********** The story is about a boy, Ace, who is suddenly healed from his pain. He decides to make the best out of his god (?) given gift. You can expect politics, show business, videogames, sports, and much more. I hope you enjoy the novel, Happy Reading! The image does not belong to me, full credits to the creator, if you wish for me to remove it, contact me at: insidiouswebnovel@gmail.com

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Chapter 1Chapter 1:

In an attic in New York, the lights of the sun reflected by the tinted windows of the various skyscrapers gave the polished, marble black countertops an almost iridescent quality. The spacious attic, however, for all its beauty, seemed empty, the surfaces bare and no decorations in sight save for a smattering of weapons anchored to the walls. This set-up could be described as Spartan at best, all furniture clearly high-end, yet all in either black or white. In continuum with the colour scheme, in a king-sized bed with simple yet luxurious white sheets a silhouette could be made out.

The defined contour of his figure made him appear as skinny - almost sickly so, and yet, if one glanced at his face, the striking face that one would observe could only be described in one way: angelic. The peaceful aspects of his sleeping face give him an almost ethereal quality - as if he may be broken if woken up too harshly. The inky black hair that contoured his face seemed to have a life of its own, radiating in its absence of colour. The boy lay there peacefully, breathing in and out in a measured manner.

Suddenly, breaking the idyllic image, the boy woke up and groaned:

"Uuaaaaghhhh"

He stretched, thin arms in which the elbow protruded profusely, he let out a long, tiresome sigh and muttered: "Another day, huh.". It all seemed well, and yet suddenly, he opened his eyes and let out: "The pain! It's gone!".

He remembered, the chronic pain he had suffered from since the accident had made his life hell. At his young 13 years of age, he had gone through more pain than people usually went through in 50 lifetimes. The car accident he had been in was the cause of this, 10 years of hell, and he could hardly remember the cause. All he knew was that a drunk driver (now apprehended by the authorities), had crashed a stolen oil rig into the car that had contained his whole family, him, his older sister, his mother and the driver - his father. He remembered nothing from that day and the weeks that followed, you would assume that he would, considering it was the event that marked the death of his family, and yet all he could picture of those moments was the pain.

It was as if someone had been tearing at his insides, from his most delicate nerve endings to the most robust bones in his body. Now, the boy felt none of that, he simply felt peace, peace and the pleasure of being alive.

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Volumen 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volumen 1 :Volume 1

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So, I have just finished catching up to the current chapters (167 at this point it time), and I have to say, I really love it. The writing quality is quite good, except for the occasional grammar or spelling mistake, and does not do anything to make your reading experience worse or anything of the sort. For stability of updates, I don't really know myself, but by going from when the chapters were released before, it seems quite stable. Now, story development for me was good. The pace for some might seem a bit slow since for the most part, it's just talking about his daily life and stuff, but I find it enjoyable. Most people thought that the grandmother was annoying and didn't like her, but she seemed ok enough to me, and in recent chapters, it clears things up about her so it's fine. The character design of Ace (mc). I enjoy watching Ace's character development and watching him mature, make friends, stream, make music, and all of the sorts. He enjoys his life to the fullest and is a genius, which for me is entertaining. He makes friends easily, and is nice, but is still careful and not naive, and can read everyone like a book. World background, not much to say. The setting is basically the same, starting from about 2015, and shifting events around a little to fit the storyline. There are some real-life people who are included, as well as some made up ones, so nothing too different. All in all, I would recommend this novel, so give it a try, and if you like it, good for you, if not then it's just not for you, so that's that, and we all have our preferences, so it's fine.

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