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SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)

Autor: Drkest
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Lesen Sie den Roman SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto) des Autors Drkest, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Born to trickery, will Ohashi be able to survive in the world with such a massive target on his back? Carrying the legacy of two famed families, will he be able to change the fate of a world doomed to...

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Born to trickery, will Ohashi be able to survive in the world with such a massive target on his back? Carrying the legacy of two famed families, will he be able to change the fate of a world doomed to misery and death? What changes will the first son of Sakumo Hatake bring with his mere presence?

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Ruckducker
RuckduckerLv4Ruckducker

The MC is a huge disappointment he’s reincarnated but doesn’t change anything even letting his father die and the power scaling is sooooooo wonky he was able to make one of the Sanin bleed while opening 2 of the 8 gates but against one of the seven swordsmen plus mei he had to open 5 of the gates and still got absolutely destroyed and was an inch from death. I wouldn’t recommend it which is a shame as it is high quality writing for this app but mostly everything else about this story ruined it for me.

Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Below AverageWQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process (pertaining to the original story). 2/5SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5CD: MC is a transmigrate/reincarnate but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Author-san is too scared to damage the storyline nor plot. MC is too passive as there are tons of ways to vilify the elder councils or decision of Hokoge but still refrain from doing so. His foreknowledge & earth/previous life experiences is wasted. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed. 2/5WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

Jude_Ovie
Jude_OvieLv4Jude_Ovie

Was enjoyable at first, really liked it till the author felt the main character should be madara's pawn. Story when down hill after that and I'm sure it won't recover.

0dinson
0dinsonLv50dinson

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reckless_soul1453
reckless_soul1453Lv3reckless_soul1453

The story is moving pretty well as of now. I am big fan of author's other work HP: Magical Life. The characters are well written, hoping to see a better kakashi this time, with or without kanabi bridge incident. A Kakshi without the sharingan would be much better....

malhiharjot
malhiharjotLv3malhiharjot

How to turn his own Good story into garbage you can learn from this, lol I am your white shadow and denjo shimura guy did sacrifice his eye to cast genjutsu to come back and even without he have strong strength of air vacuum ninja art

Rk6T
Rk6TLv4Rk6T

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1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv141stDrunkenImmortal

Trash after like 20 chapters.

QueLeo
QueLeoLv1QueLeo

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DarkWolf_27
DarkWolf_27Lv11DarkWolf_27

I was finding it decent in the beginning then the power scaling became extremely shakey and kinda ruined it for me

uchiha_satoru
uchiha_satoruLv4uchiha_satoru

Very enjoyable fanfic, the only complaint is that the updates are very slow

Dr_Void
Dr_VoidLv4Dr_Void

unlike most writers iIcan see that he puts in the effort for grammar and spel checking absolutely love the fan-fiction and hope you continue uploading.

SuohDaoist
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Copy and paste story original. Mc is pathetic, cuck kid and femboy [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Shaggnasty
ShaggnastyLv14Shaggnasty

This is a fun Naruto FF. The MC is out of the academy, so you don't have to suffer through that. So far the MC isn't OP and catching all the lady's. It's a nice change of pace from the other FF. Give this gem a chance.

uchiha_satoru
uchiha_satoruLv4uchiha_satoru

great story, love the mc and its powers along with possible connection with Tobirama.don't drop it and pls increase the updating stability

Ignox_Xongi
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Awriter
AwriterLv4Awriter

This is great and you did a great job Author ..................................................................................................................

FadeKnight
FadeKnightLv2FadeKnight

21 chapters in, this is a great read. The intrigue is great. The premise is fun . Here is five stars to keep you going. I have no doubt that this will be a great story.

Anas_AsBEIY
Anas_AsBEIYLv1Anas_AsBEIY

A story that talks about Naruto in a brother Kakshi from the father his mother is the cousin of Kato Dan Bigger than Kakashi It seems that he is incarnate, but not much about the character The writing style is great And his strength too Shazoni seems to have made her big and she is from the Kakashi generation It's strange how Shissoi with Itachi and they're very small.

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