Reincarnated as Toji in Chainsaw Man(Spanish Ver)

this isn't toji this is a guy who looks like him. the first 2 chapters make barley any sense its says for instance (23 days later) then tell you its been 2 days. he befriends makima in a matter of 3 sentences watches her get kidnapped wakes up in a forest then demands training and gets it you see the problem? he's adjusted to his new reality super fast he goes from almost dying to training with a random old dude witch makes zero sense to me

The idea is kind of good, but the exclusion is very average, things happen too quickly with almost no time for a proper introduction of the main characters, I don't like showing a plot happening in the background and taking so long to put into practice, besides the What irritates me the most recently is that the protagonist spends the entire chapter bragging about bathing the strongest, only for a few chapters later to appear seriously injured out of nowhere with no explanation and the author introduces a flashback to tell what happened, instead of showing things naturally (Google Translate)

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There aren't many Chainsaw_man stories and seeing this story from a mc like Toji Fushiguro really caught my eye and I found this gem keep it up author-sama.

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i love the book and love what your doing with makima.... i also like the mc.... and the writing quality is great other than the first few chaps are a little rushed.... other than that 10/10 would read again

This is pretty good the only problem will be that it takes some time for a new ch to come out

good beginning

why weren't you told this novel is a crossover!. Ksksmsmakdmmaksjdndkdkdksmdndmsmdmmdmdndksdjndjdjdkdkdkmdjdjdksksmdjdjdjdkdkqkqkskskskskskskek

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The story was alright until the time skip. I thought it would be different but no author made his oc into a copy of toji but rce.

Esta bueno no es toji pero esta bien el asesino de cazadores va rápido y está bien la obra original hase lo mismo pura peleas y también la idea de meter satoru gojo ya que seria interesante ver como reaccionan los demonios contra el infinito

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