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Man, this story is Chinese, right? Now I wonder, what the hell are they going to do to make Tang San a threat in the protagonist's ending? As always happens, the guys come up with some lame excuse to make Tang San a difficult enemy. I'm really curious what crazy Chinese thing they're going to do this time, besides just killing him off.

impossible...

I've been watching a lot of Chinese stories lately, I'm leaving my conviction here, Yu Xiaogang won't die under any circumstances, Chinese authors are too cowardly to do that, there are always twenty near-deaths and then the miserable guy dies (Google Translate)

Thanks for the words, friend, but what do you think you're going to achieve with that? Offend me? You're the author of this story and I ended up offending you? Well, it doesn't matter. If you think the words of someone who read the story and gave their personal opinion are wrong, that's your problem, not mine. Have a good night, boss (Google Translate)

The protagonist's family is going to die, right?

Wait, is it a non-harem? and Naruko and Hitomi? (Google Tradutor)

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My God, what's up author? Edit these chapters better, I had to put in some effort to read them, the story is very complicated to follow with no separation between so many sentences, sometimes I don't even know who's talking or where they are

Dude, am I the only one bothered by the fact that in both the original and the fanfics Mylo is so wronged? I feel sorry for the guy, he's always lucid about Power and yet everyone sees him as if he were wrong (Google Translate)

So Freya will have a relationship with MC?