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MC dies forced down to his knees and executed. Reborn in the Naruto Verse with a system created by his ancestor. He will die over and over again each time respawning in a different world keeping skills from each world. Short chapters but I will publish often 7 chapters a week. Give me a week to build them up

Chapter 1Prologue

His last thought before dying, fuck the world. Bang! Bastion expected to die the second the bullet entered his head. That didn't happen he felt the small caliber round moved through his brains destroying memories before his forehead exploded. A chunk of skull cut off one of his optic nerves cutting his vision in half part of his skull went sailing before it hit a wall. His body collapsed, and he saw one of the soldiers clean the blood off his shoes, with Bastion's hair. Somehow his even through the ringing he heard one of the soldiers speak. "Now that he's out of the way lets go to the next one. Robert, stop playing with the man's scalp and keep up. We have to execute at least 20 more before dark or we won't make our quota." Then everything went dark.

Bastion opened his mouth and tried to gasp but fluids shot down his throat. For a second, he flailed and kicked before realizing he wasn't drowning. Wherever he was, there was loud steady beating and he felt at peace. He was warm, despite the darkness there wasn't any danger, and he felt alright.

System has located Descendant #8975689 loading 321

Initializing Symbiosis 89% 98% 99% 100… Symbiosis complete

He opened his mouth to speak but his voice wouldn't come out. "What are you?" He shouted as loud as his brain would allow. Bastion felt his head where the hole should be, and he was whole.

"Careful, host's skull has yet to close. Development is only at 98% you are still weeks from being born." The mechanical voice said. It rumbled through his mind making his joints shake.

"Who are you?" Bastion asked.

"I'm Ouroboros and I'm now a part of you. Would you like to view your status? Most descendants choose to view the marvel of technology given by my creator your Ancestor." Ouroboros said.

"Your name's too long I'm going to call you Snake for short. But sure, show me what dying has gotten me." Bastion grumbled.

Bastion

Age 8months 3weeks (25years)

World: Naruto Main Timeline probability 50%

Bloodlines: Uchiha 100%

Chakra 50

Chakra control 0

Ki 0

Ki Control 0

Mana 0

Mana control 0

Etc…

System points: 50

"Ok, why can't I use any of the powers except for Chakra?" Bastion asked Snake

"Please don't call me Snake your ancestor gave me the name Ouroboros, I am of the Rebirth system symbionts created by your great ancestor. To answer your other question, you must acquire bloodlines of races that naturally have the energy. You can also use the system shop to purchase some bloodlines that your ancestor saved and techniques. It is possible to do anything with my help." Snake said arrogantly.

"It sounds like my ancestor was awesome. Sure, wish I was born already. Don't you want to get started with our grand adventure." Bastion hoped the dumb snake would get the hint.

"I can read your mind Bastion and yes it would be great, but despite my power there are some things I can't do." Snake said. "Stop calling me Snake! Uh oh." Bastion was flung back cushioned by his mother's body. The comforting sound of her heart beating was no more. Just as it couldn't get any worse Bastion felt cold steel rip into his new home and stab him in the stomach twist and pull away.

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Writing Quality: 5 stars. There are no grammar issues, sentence structure is on point, and possibly the best of all, the author actually speaks English. Stability of Updates: 5 stars. The updates are pretty much daily. Even then, I'm a bit more lenient on this section than most. I'd prefer to get fewer high quality chapters, than more low quality ones. Story Development: 5 stars. Fantastic, on point, glorious, positive comment, etc. This fic is one of the rarer ones in that there is no obvious railroading from the author. Everything that happens in the story follows a smooth series of events. The only case of railroading is the absorption skill the MC got at the beginning of the novel. Frankly, that's getting a pass because the system would've given him an overpowered skill from that lottery anyway. Other authors should look to this fic for inspiration on how to write a system novel that can be taken seriously, as apposed to one that is read for laughs. Character Design: 5 stars. The novel is chock full of Original Characters interacting with canon characters, and somehow, someway, the author has managed to do so incredibly well. The OCs are fully developed, have their own thoughts, interests, dreams, goals, and change dynamically in response to what happens in the world around them. They even act in a believable manner given their backstory. A bunch of fics on this site have Ocs that never left their house, were overweight, lazy, etc, and I refuse to believe that someone like that can and more importantly WOULD fight immediately after being inserted into a foreign world. Seeing some random slob getting into fights with canon characters within a week of showing up never fails to make my head hurt. But I digress. The canonical characters don't receive as much focus as the MC, but they still act appropriately given their background. Even the minor changes to some of the characters happen gradually in response to changes the MC has caused to occur. Well done author, well done indeed. World Background: 5 stars. If I could, I'd give you 6. Frankly, this novel has the most well thought out interaction between a system and a series of different worlds. Each power granted by the system is examined in depth in how it works naturally, as well as in comparison with whatever world the MC is currently in. On top of that, the author has CLEARLY done his research on the setting of the worlds. There are no glaringly obvious mistakes that even a casual fan could notice. More than that, there are no mistakes that a dedicated fan would notice. The amount of thought put into the interaction between the different powers and worlds is incredible. Summary: This, this one of, if not the best novel on this site. It may not fit in with what people WANT. It may not be in a "mainstream" popular world at the moment. Hell, there are some parts of the MC's personality that annoy me, but at the end of it, this novel tells a story. It tells a compelling story that was crafted with thought, with care, and should quite frankly, at least be in the top-freaking-ten in the original section by virtue of quality alone.

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