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Lesen Sie den Roman Reborn Metal BAT on the MCU des Autors Marcelinho_Ggazeli, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.A new graduate dies, but has a chance to be born back.(very poorly written, I use the help of a translator, I'm still studying English and I'm trying to write better)...

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A new graduate dies, but has a chance to be born back. (very poorly written, I use the help of a translator, I'm still studying English and I'm trying to write better)

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[WARNING: This novel contains some mature content] “I can’t go to the blind date looking like this; I’m going to scare him away. Please, Sis, I need you to pretend to be me.” “Just until I recover...” ... It's New Year's Eve... After a freak accident, Maya Yeung finds herself attending a blind date on behalf of her twin sister. At first, she questions the morals behind lying to the unsuspecting stranger, but when she's met with the rich, dominant, and arrogant playboy, she no longer feels so bad. "This man deserves to be taught a lesson." However, as she gets to know the mysterious Lucas Lee, she discovers he isn't quite what he appears to be and uncovers a web of secrets and lies. Including the fact that her sister's 'accident' wasn't really an accident after all... "You've been lying to me. How am I supposed to trust you?" "You've been lying to me too...but I still trust you with my life..." ... Start the new year with a bit of mystery, a bit of comedy, and lots of romance. ... Note: the cover artwork does not belong to me. If you enjoy this novel, come join my community of 250+ on discord to discuss: https://discord.gg/wQzT7Pu For other updates or to donate, feel free to visit: https://www.patreon.com/yunyi Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

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The king's Choice

Matilda was angry and restless, "I know my son, I just feel he's unnecessarily interested in that idiot. She must leave this castle with her mother!".     Gwen was kneeling beside her trying to calm her lady down, "My lady, don't forget you are the king's mother and apart from that, your influence and power is unmatchable among the women in this kingdom. Nothing will happen that you don't like".     Matilda felt like crying and throwing tantrums but she had to maintain her composure in front of her hand maid, Gwen, "But things are already getting out of my control! I need to play a major card that will bring Tyler back under my grasp".      "Why don't you get a woman for him", Gwen suggested.      Matilda looked lost in thought before she finally smirked. She had thought of something, "Gwen, you have to keep an eye on that lowly new kitchen servant. You should always stay around the guest palace. I wonder why Tyler hasn't moved her to the servant quarters but nevermind. Just do as I say and make sure you report every of her movements to me and I'll take care of the rest".      Gwen looked shocked and confused, "I do not dare question you my lady but if I'm there all the time who would take care of you?"      "Just do as I say and then call Yvonne for me", Matilda said.      Gwen frowned but she still bowed reluctantly, she wasn't happy that Matilda was going to replace her.     "I don't know what you're thinking but I am not replacing you, idiot. You're just the only one I trust for this job and you'll have to hurry up and find something except you want to keep watching her. When you find something interesting, you'll return to my palace", Matilda said with an evil grin and then she stood up. She had to start the next move immediately. She immediately went to meet Tyler in his court room.      She entered gracefully and as she entered, everyone bowed except Tyler.      "Is anything wrong?", He asked knowing fully well that his mother had come to give him another head ache.      "Nothing, I would like to request that this meeting end as I'd want to have a word with you and it's urgent", Matilda said confidently but silently hoping her son wouldn't embarrass her. Honestly, she didn't know what was wrong with her son!.       "Ok", Tyler replied calmly and ordered them to all leave except Thomas. Matilda frowned and turned to Thomas.      "Tyler, the matter is between us", she asked while eyeing Thomas.      "Rest assured, Thomas is my loyal servant", Tyler replied calmly but deep down he was laughing, enjoying the sight of his mother like that. He was purposely driving her to the edge.     Matilda was trying to keep herself from exploding out of anger so deeply inhaled to calm herself down.     "Ok, you promised me you'll meet Duke Gregory's daughter, you have to meet her tomorrow. Duke Gregory's holding a soiree tomorrow", Matilda said calmly though she was raging inside.       Tyler pretended to think about it for a while, he was wondering the kind of deal his mother made with him. "Ok".      Matilda was careful not to show any triumphant expression rather she remained indifferent. She wanted her son to be scared and curious as to what she was thinking. "I'll also want to speak to the wives of your late father in the castle".      Tyler's expression turned from shock to surprise to worry and then he chuckled. Matilda didn't care about him chuckling, she remained indifferent but then inwardly smiled after seeing Tyler's expression when she said it. Since he became king, she had never seen him loosing composure after hearing someone speak.      "Why? if I may ask", Tyler asked.       Thomas was shocked too but as usual his face remained expressionless.     

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Seikai
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Umm, Author-san could probably do a better job with the help of some grammar app or something. The writing is messy and it's all cramped up...

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dope_is_my_name
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Story is “eehh” cool idea but bad execution some of the decisions the author made are not (imo) well thought out and theres already some plot holes also the grammar is alright not the best but it doesnt fit with an american setting even though its not always an American setting i would use grammarly for your writing and watch some gangsta movies and study their dialogue not hating just tryna help good luck author

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Miki_Marlo75
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meme like the plot the grammar leaves much to be desired apart from that everything else I like I hope to read the next chapters luck author

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I'm just gonna leave this review here 'cause I think this novel needs some positive feedback. While it's true that grammar seems to be the author biggest flaw I didn't find it to be as problematic as described in others reviews: words are never misspelled and the rarely seen syntax errors don't pose a problem to the comprehension of the story or the fluidity of the narration (since they're few and far between. I'm instead really intrigued by the plot of the story. The MC's power grants for an error proof power escalation that will avoid the fighting gets boring while also allowing him potential for growth. (I just hope the struggle for the win will be showcased with more Pathos in the future) The characters are vibrant enough, with clearly (although a bit one dimensional for now) personalities and ambitions. I'm a fan of the cast since several less know characters are used; also I really like both Annie (the other OC) powers and appearance. The power scaling is also well planned in my opinion. As for the world, although some wacky stuff happens (like him being the leader of a gang at 12), it's justified enough troughs the narration and the fact that this is a universe in which realism is kinda futile given the context. All in all this promises to be a well tough out story (especially considering the author is new at this). If I'm allowed to give some tips as a reader and not a experienced writer I would advise you to: -increase the dialogue; narration is the lazy man's way out and allows for very little creativity as emotions tends to get lost when only showing the results or actions. Writing dialogue consents for more confrontations to take place showcasing more intent in your character while it would also allow you to: be less paranoid about grammar (nobody speaks like they would write) and leave more the true thoughts of the speaker for the reader to figure out which I find a major appeal in. -increase the description; I trust in your creativity since I really like Annie's character and I would appreciate if you showcased it more during the story even in more subtle things: like reactions, scenery, actions etch... You shouldn't be afraid to slow down the plot for the sake of painting a more detailed picture. ...................................... Although I just wanted to show my appreciation for your novel this already turned into a thesis so I won't mind adding a few extra things at this point. I really hope the fact that his group is getting infiltrated won't be just an appendix to the fact that he now has great influence but will instead will turn into a plot point like Natasha "infiltration" did in iron man 2 I'm from the #NOHAREM gang, not that it will prevent me for reading the story. I just think that while being sexually attracted to multiple people being romantically invested in more than one person is not a thing. Thanks again for sharing your work and for reading my unjustifiably long review (hopefully)

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Misteu
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I like the idea of his main power being getting stronger while fighting but there are tons of grammar mistakes and some weird decisions and some random ones too. I thought it was ok.

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colbster303
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it was really good at first but the author just kept digging a deeper and deeper hole. He forced the relationship with the pink girl then he takes his arm away it's bad really bad a disappointment.

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IDontUnderstand0_0
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This story can be more attractive after being rewritten. You just need to work on grammars and you don't need a perfect one now but at least made the point clear to avoid confusion. Also, you need to work on PoV more, it just doesn't feel right since it feels like PoVs are getting cut when it just started, you need to make them a bit longer at least to not make it like that. My suggestion is try to read how other authors do their PoVs in their characters(try some chapters of epic of Leviathan 'marvel arc' since it has a lot of PoVs), second is avoid using dots at the end of every PoVs, no, avoid using it when its not needed and try others like exclamation or question marks since dots are just ruining this novel more. This novel is although isn't the best but it's okay for reading if you don't have anything to do or can't find anything to read, but of course it's just base on me though I'm sure others would still like it, so yeah do try my suggestion if you want. Don't trust my review much as I'm only at chapter9 The stars, it's just there as a light bulb to cheer the author, don't mind that.

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