I know many will agree that the concept was good, but I f*cked the story and now it is becoming more horrible.
I wanted to make this a peaceful story, but ended up messing it up. So, I plan on rewriting this and hopefully make it better than this.
I did want to make the MC and the other characters more important to the story than just characters that appear once and disappear. I think I over did it a little.
If you have any other suggestions, I would love to hear them.