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Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

[Warning BTW! If you read the reviews before reading, you'll get basically Fake News. One of them is basically 'I dont understand english so the book is bad' so! Just give it a try, if you don't like it, you don't like it. But the reviews are misleading.] A classic Pokemon story with a System. I want Opinions on the story quality, direction, and writing for battles or otherwise. Nobody in the Discord wants to do it, so you lucky fellows will have to do! After beating Radical Red Hardcore Nuzlocke without losing a single Pokemon, Ace was rebirthed in the Pokemon world with a System! Are you sick and tired of everyone and their mother having a Lucario? Grossed out by the borderline Bestiality between Trainers and Gardevoir? Looking for something fresh with Pokemon that are rarely used?! Then this is probably for you! (Uses Radical Red Abilities, they're explained anyway so don't worry about it.)

AgentMonke · Anime und Comics
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152 Chs

No Ferris Wheel=Poor

Ace flew on Noivern with Elesa in his arms, looking at the map, "This is a landmark called Tagtree Thicket. Hooligans painted these trees for art or something. There's a lot of Applin in this area apparently." Elesa stuck out her tongue, "I don't want to live in a forest."

Ace stroked her hair gently, "We can build a city. Whatever you want." Elesa looked at him happily as he continued looking at the map, "There's also a few cities nearby. Levincia City has an Electric Type Gym." Elesa pouted and Ace kissed her head, "It's alright, we can put up another Electric Type Gym. Who said you can't have two? If you really want, we can take over the Gym there."

Elesa giggled and shook her head, "Forget it. Who's the Gym Leader there?" Ace looked at the information, "A couple actually. And the girl is pregnant." Ace was dumbfounded and Elesa looked at him while laughing.

Ace looked at her and smiled funnily before adding, "The South Province has a lot of little towns. The West is mostly beaches. The North is just snow and cold climates. There's even the tallest mountain in Paldea there. Oh wow."

Elesa thought about it and hummed, "Where do you want to go, Darling?" Ace kissed her and smiled, "Wherever you want. Other than the West… I don't like the heat." Elesa giggled happily, "Pick a spot."

Ace looked down and smiled wryly, "I like this spot… It's close enough to the North and not too far from Levincia." Elesa squished his face, "Then whatever you want." Ace pinched her nose happily, "Alright. Let's settle here. I'll see what I can do about the Gym problem…"

As they came down, there was a clearing area.

Ace looked around and confirmed that this area was where the Poison Crew was supposed to be. Since they weren't here, then that means that these guys were still in school!

Ace carried Elesa and asked gently, "Where do you want to put our house?" Elesa looked around and saw the cliff wall bordering the back of the clearing. She pointed at a spot and Ace nodded, taking out a Glass Ball.

He let it drop in Elesa's hands, smiling gently, "Throw it down where you want, Elesa." as he walked over to the spot where she pointed. Elesa looked excited and played with the glass ball before throwing it out, "Our Home! I choose you!"

Ace laughed as the Glass Ball turned into the House that Ace had in Oreburgh. Even the area around it morphed to fit the Hot Spring. Ace carried Elesa, releasing all their Pokemon into the backyard before going upstairs.

Elesa looked at Ace laying next to her and smiled sweetly, "I love you." Ace pursed his lips, "Me too." Elesa grinned and snuggled into his arms. Ace held her and squeezed her chest as she giggled, "They're sensitive right now!" Ace chuckled, "And bigger!" Elesa giggled happily, kissing him as he leaned over…

The next day

Ace was standing outside on the phone, "Yeah, I was thinking about a gimmick." Geeta blinked, "Gimmick?" Ace scratched his neck and said, "How about sprinkling another 8 Gyms around Paldea and setting a Champion's Series."

Geeta tilted her head, "Champion's Series? Continue." Ace explained, "You'd have the same concept, but the difficulty is increased. The new 8 Gyms can use more strength and add a second circle around Paldea. For example, you can keep the 8 types and put 8 more Gyms of the Same type, those old Gym Leaders who aren't satisfied with the restrictions on strength can move to the Champion Series Gym."

He looked over at Elesa and continued, "Anyway, you said some Gym Leaders weren't happy that they had to use little strength, right? This way, you can satisfy them and enrich the Trainer Series with a harder challenge. Champion's Series is just a name, it can be Challenger Series, Gauntlet Series, Abuse Series, Cry home to your mother series, whatever you want."

Geeta's lips twitched, what was that last one again? She thought about it and it clicked, "You just want Elesa to have Electric Gym… right?" Ace's lips twitched, "Okay, you can pretend not to know…" Geeta laughed and nodded, "But, this is what I brought you here for, right? Hmm. A Champion's Series sounds interesting. I'll notify the other Gym Leaders and see what they think."

She paused and asked, "By the way, what's a Speed Battle?" Ace blinked and replied, "Oh. It's a Battle on a racetrack with RotomRunners that I invented. You can only use Fast Pokemon that can keep up with your Runner and the Trainers battle at high speed." Geeta was stunned, "Isn't that dangerous?"

Ace laughed, "And?" Geeta was speechless, Ace added, "Don't worry, if you can't handle it, there's an Autopilot mode. There's even an Energy Barrier built into the Runner specific to these races, so if a Pokemon hits the Runner, you won't fly off into the sunset." Geeta nodded in a daze, "Oh… Oh!"

Ace's lips twitched and he changed the topic, "Don't worry about it, anyway, ask the Gym Leaders… Oh, right, can I build whatever I want?" Geeta asked, "What are you thinking?" Ace replied simply, "A City." Elesa looked at him, Ace added, "With a Ferris Wheel." 

Elesa nodded with satisfaction.

What kind of city doesn't have a Ferris Wheel?

A poor one!

Geeta nodded, "Sure." Ace added, "And the Speed Battle Track." Geeta nodded, "Okay." Ace smiled, "Ok, thanks Boss!" before hanging up. Elesa looked over and Ace gave her a thumbs up, "She said okay." Elesa cheered, "A new Ferris Wheel! This one has to be huge! Like really big! Massive!"

Ace waved his phone, "How big?" Elesa frowned and opened her arms, "Like this." Ace spit out and laughed, "You are too cute! Hahahahaha!" he turned back to the Shop Screen, looking at his Bag.

[Fairy in a Bottle]

[Hoverboard Blueprints]

[Perfected Super Soldier Serum x2]

[House Upgrade Token]

[1 of Every Berry Tree Sapling]

The rest was miscellaneous items, bits and bobs.

But thankfully, there was a section on the side to designate items to sell in the Stores.

Ace closed the Bag and looked at the System Shop, scrolling through before finding what he was looking for.

[City Creation Token- 1 Billion BP- A completely customizable City, set up to fit whatever you want or need. From Gladiator Arenas to Space Stations and everything in between! Comes with customizable shops, Pokemon Centers, Police stations, etc.]

Ace looked at the City Creation Token and then said, "Yeah but… does it have Ferris Wheels…"

[And Ferris Wheels!]

Ace pursed his lips and looked at the '1 Billion' in front of him… Maybe if he kept staring it would go down? He turned to his Pokedollar count…

[4,803,963,927,163 Pokedollars]

Ace blinked slowly and formed a question mark over his head.

[Since you have a child, Elesa's Finances are counted with yours. Including all her assets that she still receives income from, this is the Total.]

Ace was dumbfounded, "I'm so rich?! Then there's no need to hesitate! BUY BUY BUY!"

He converted 2 Trillion Pokedollars to 2 Billion BP and bought the City Creation Token.

It was bright Gold and in the shape of a Ferris Wheel!

[Designate Tagtree Thicket as Territory?]

Ace nodded, "Do it, Pepe Le Pew!"