Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature

and her ei thought writing a percy jackson fanfic was an easy demigod oc story... no... litterally every single fic on here is about a god mc... Well what did i expect, i lost hope on webnovel the moment i found out the top 20 fics were harems.... 5 stars cause creation is hard

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The premise of the story is good, but the terrible grammar ruins it for me.

Sorry for the previous punctuation and grammar errors as of now I'm using a site to correct those mistakes and have started rewriting all chapters except author notes after correcting their errors sorry for the inconveniences.

I’d give it a shot if the grammar was any better. We can all bear with some errors and faulty translations, and let’s not talk about Chinese tropes, but this is another level. The grammar is completely out of whack and entire paragraphs repeat themselves, points of view get jumbled and entire paragraph POVS only make the story messier. Final thoughts: nice idea, a god that’s not the Big Three and has an unusual power, executed very badly. The MC goes to sleep three chapters in and misses 1 thousand years of story and plot development.

Writing Quality: I'm sorry, but for someone like me reading this is a bit painful. I would suggest at least having an editor or beta reader to go through with it just to make corrections in grammar and sentences because some sentences don't make sense. Story Development: It's developing quite nicely, I would say. It takes a different view on the mythology. There's just not much for me to comment on right now. Characters Design: A new type of character, an OC...Horray!! The thought put on the main character was fine, I can't say fleshed out yet because I haven't seen much challenges the main character faced. But the other characters in the story overall have personalities, but they're still a bit flat to me. Updating Stability: No comment, as long as this story gets finished I don't care either how long you update or how much you update. World Background: It's a fanfiction, the world already exists. You're not creating a new world, but maybe expanding on it or building on it. But as of now, the expansion/building I have yet to see much.

Please. Please for the love of God, use commas and dots. The story is great hut it's hard to understand if you mash it all up in one paragraph and not put commas, spaces, and dots.

I mean it has a lot to be desired for example, I sometimes see grammar and punctuation mistakes but overall all. I think it's one of the better percy Jackson fanfics I've read so far, So please continue writing author-sama😁

Great story. Chapters are short but not short to the point where it’s annoying. Plot was slower after titanomachia. Mid-paced story. Would recommend if looking for a chill read.

I can see lots of potential in this cannot wait for the next chapter grammar is not the best but good enough. - (P.S This is just for word count)

Updated my review after reading through it more. It’s interesting at first just gets boring after a while

this novel is very good but not consistent. also please try to show other views more besides the MC so to get a better view and idea of the story

love the book, the book was 5 star but update quality needs work loved it

This book was extremely refreshing to read since most of the books on this app is just garbage, I can honestly say I’ve been extremely impressed with you auhor.

I liked the plot I hope the story continues,it has an original plot and does not fall into the cliché I would also like it to have a love interest but we just have to wait

Good

hmm I'm gonna satly it's good. .

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This have a lot of grammar issues, but author tries to fix some of it some it alright. Other than that, I would say this is worth your time.