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Passage to El Paso's Shì (逝)

Marian and her friends, Ana, Camille, and Stella, were having a blast on their school trip to Baguio. They'd explored the Bencab Museum, indulged in strawberry treats, and even rode swan boats at Burnham Park. Now, they were settling into the Diplomat Hotel, excited for the rest of their adventure. But amidst the fun, a strange feeling settled over the group – a sense of unease, a whisper of something unknown lurking in the shadows. Was it just their imagination, or had something unseen attached itself to them? The Diplomat Hotel, with its grand halls and breathtaking views, held a secret that only they seemed to sense. Their trip to Baguio was about to take a turn, and the girls wouldn't know what hit them.

daenerys_jon · Fantasie
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The Shadow of the Lake

Marian's heart hammered against her ribs as she raced through the park, the sound of her own breath echoing in her ears. The man's words, "This place is off-limits," echoed in her mind, a chilling reminder of the danger that lurked in the shadows. She didn't know what he meant, but she knew that she had to get away from him.

She stumbled around a corner, her lungs burning, and found herself in a secluded area of the park. The lights from the main pathways were dim here, casting long, eerie shadows that danced in the darkness. The air was thick with the scent of pine and damp earth, a stark contrast to the festive atmosphere of the park.

Suddenly, she heard a sound behind her. A soft, rustling sound, like the whisper of leaves in the wind. She froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the darkness.

There was nothing there.

But the feeling of being watched persisted. She could feel it, a cold, heavy presence that seemed to be closing in on her. She took a step back, her hand instinctively reaching for the locket that she had found at the Diplomat Hotel. The locket, engraved with the name "Maria," felt heavy in her hand, a tangible reminder of the mysteries they had encountered.

She didn't know why, but she felt a strange sense of comfort in holding the locket. It was as if it was a shield against the darkness that surrounded her.

She decided to try and find her way back to the main pathways. She knew that she couldn't stay in this secluded area. The darkness here was too oppressive, too heavy. She needed to get back to the lights, back to the safety of the crowd.

As she walked, she noticed a small, wooden sign that pointed towards a path leading down to the lake. The sign was faded and worn, but the words were still legible: "The Whispering Path."

She hesitated for a moment. The path looked dark and ominous, and she had a feeling that it would lead her deeper into the shadows. But she also had a feeling that it was the only way out of this secluded area.

She took a deep breath and stepped onto the path.

The Whispering Path was narrow and winding, its surface covered in fallen leaves and pine needles. The trees on either side of the path were tall and thick, their branches reaching out like grasping hands. The air was thick with the scent of pine and damp earth, and the only sound was the soft rustling of leaves in the wind.

As she walked, the darkness here felt different, heavier than the shadows of the park. It wasn't just the absence of light, but a presence, a weight that pressed in on her, suffocating, threatening to swallow her whole.

She stopped, her heart pounding in her chest. She could feel the presence of something watching her, something unseen, something that was lurking in the shadows. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the darkness.

There was nothing there.

But she could feel it, the presence, the weight, the darkness. It was all around her, closing in on her, suffocating her.

She took a step back, her hand instinctively reaching for the locket. She held it tight, as if it were a lifeline, a shield against the darkness.

Suddenly, she heard a sound. A soft, whispering sound, like the voice of a child, calling her name.

She froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the darkness.

There was nothing there.

But the whispering continued, a faint, ethereal voice weaving through the trees, drawing her towards the heart of the darkness.

She took a step back, her hand still clutching the locket. She had to get out of here. She had to get back to the lights, back to the safety of the crowd.

But the whispering continued, growing louder, more insistent. It was as if the voice was beckoning her, calling her to the lake.

She couldn't resist the call. She took a step forward, her feet moving on their own, as if they were being pulled towards the lake.

As she walked, the whispering grew louder, until it was almost deafening. It was as if the voice was right beside her, whispering in her ear, calling her name.

She reached the edge of the lake. The water was dark and still, reflecting the lights of the park like a thousand tiny stars. The air was thick with mist, and the only sound was the whispering voice, calling her name.

She looked down at the lake, her heart pounding in her chest. The water was so dark, so deep, so mysterious. She could feel the presence of something beneath the surface, something that was watching her, something that was waiting for her.

Panic clawed at her throat. She had to get out of here. The locket felt heavy in her hand, a desperate reminder of the danger that surrounded her.

The whispers became a tangible force, weaving through the air, pulling her towards the lake like a current drawing a leaf to the sea.

The whispering voice seemed to emanate from the lake itself, pulling her towards its depths. She took a step forward, her feet sinking into the soft earth, as if the ground itself was guiding her towards the water.

As she walked, the whispering grew louder, until it was almost deafening. It was as if the voice was right beside her, whispering in her ear, calling her name.

She reached the edge of the lake. The water was dark and still, reflecting the lights of the park like a thousand tiny stars. The air was thick with mist, and the only sound was the whispering voice, calling her name.

She looked down at the lake, her heart pounding in her chest. The water was so dark, so deep, so mysterious. She could feel the presence of something beneath the surface, something that was watching her, something that was waiting for her.

Marian closed her eyes, trying to shut out the whispers, but they were too strong. They were inside her now, echoing in her mind, pulling her towards the lake. She felt a strange sense of inevitability, as if she were being drawn towards a fate she couldn't escape.

Opening her eyes, she looked down at the lake. The water was still and silent, reflecting the stars above like a thousand tiny diamonds. But beneath the surface, she could feel the presence of something dark and powerful, something that was waiting for her.

She took a deep breath, her heart pounding in her chest. She knew that she had to make a choice. She could turn back, run back to the lights, back to the safety of the crowd. But she also knew that the whispers would follow her, that the darkness would always be there, waiting for her.

She closed her eyes and took a step forward. She was going to face the darkness. She was going to face the "Unknown."

The ground beneath her feet felt cold and damp, and the air was thick with mist. As she took another step, she felt a strange sensation, as if the ground were giving way beneath her. She stumbled, her hand instinctively reaching for the locket, but it was gone. She had lost it somewhere on the path.

Panic surged through her, but she forced herself to stay calm. She had to focus. She had to get out of here.

She turned to run, but her feet wouldn't move. It was as if something were holding her back, pulling her towards the lake. She tried to scream, but no sound came out.

Then, she felt it. A cold, clammy hand on her shoulder, pulling her forward. She struggled against it, but it was too strong. She was being dragged towards the edge of the lake.

*****

While Marian was struggling with the darkness of the lake, her three friends were enjoying the festive atmosphere of Burnham Park.

Ana convinced Camille and Stella to take a boat ride. The lake shimmered beneath the setting sun, reflecting the colorful lights that adorned the surrounding trees. The sound of laughter and music drifted through the air, creating a vibrant ambiance.

"This is so much fun!" Stella exclaimed, her eyes sparkling with excitement. She leaned back against the railing of the boat, letting the gentle breeze tousle her hair. The warm air carried the scent of pine and blooming flowers, a delightful contrast to the city's usual smog.

Camille, ever the observer, was fascinated by the intricate details of the park. She pointed out the different species of trees, identifying their unique shapes and colors. She sketched the vibrant hues of the sunset, capturing the beauty of the moment in her notebook.

Ana, meanwhile, was captivated by the sheer joy of being on the water. She laughed as she bounced gently on the boat, her infectious energy spreading to her friends. She imagined herself as a mermaid, gliding through the water with grace and ease, her laughter echoing through the park.

As their boat drifted along the lake, they noticed a group of young people gathered on the shore. They were singing and dancing, their voices blending with the music that played from a nearby stall. The atmosphere was electric, filled with youthful energy and carefree abandon.

Ana, always up for a challenge, suggested they join the group. Camille, ever the cautious one, hesitated, but Stella, always the adventurous one, was immediately on board.

They joined the group, dancing and singing along to the music. They laughed and joked, enjoying the simple pleasure of being young and carefree. For a moment, they forgot about the darkness that had threatened Marian. They were lost in the joy of the moment, their spirits lifted by the vibrant atmosphere of Burnham Park.

But as the sun began to set, casting long shadows across the park, they couldn't help but think of Marian. They wondered where she was and if she was safe. They knew that she had gone off on her own, and they were worried about her.

They decided to head back to the main pathway, hoping to find her. As they walked, they couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. The air felt heavy, and the shadows seemed to be closing in around them.

They reached the main pathway and looked around, but they couldn't see Marian anywhere. They called out her name, but there was no answer.

They were starting to get worried. They knew that they had to find her, and they had to find her quickly.

 *****

The air hung heavy with the scent of salt and something else, something ancient and unsettling. A lone figure stood on the precipice of a cliff, the wind whipping their hair around their face. They didn't seem to notice, their gaze fixed on the moon, a silver disc hanging low in the sky.

It was a full moon, a perfect orb bathed in an ethereal glow. But the figure didn't see its beauty. They saw something else, something hidden beneath the surface, something that pulsed with an unseen power.

"It's starting," they murmured, their voice a low, gravelly whisper that seemed to blend with the wind. They reached out a hand, as if to touch the moon, their fingers trembling slightly.

The figure was shrouded in mystery. Their face was hidden in the shadows, their features obscured by the wind and the darkness. They wore a long, dark coat, the fabric worn and faded, as if it had seen countless moons rise and fall.

Their presence was both alluring and unsettling, a whisper of power that sent shivers down the spine.

They closed their eyes, feeling the energy of the moon coursing through them, a wave of power that surged through their veins. They could feel it, the shift, the awakening, the beginning.

They knew that the world was about to change. And they knew that they had to be ready.

*****

Meanwhile, back in Burnham Park, Marian was fighting for her life. She had been pulled into the icy water of the lake, the current dragging her down, down, down. She felt her lungs burning, her vision blurring, the darkness closing in around her.

Just as she was about to give up, she felt a hand grab her. She was pulled back to the surface, gasping for air. She coughed and sputtered, her body trembling with cold and fear.

She looked up to see Lila, her face etched with concern. Lila helped her to the shore, wrapping her in a blanket.

"What happened?" Lila asked, her voice filled with worry.

Marian was too exhausted to speak. She just clung to Lila, her body trembling with fear and relief.

Lila helped her to her feet, and they walked back to the main pathway, where they found the rest of the girls. They were all worried sick, and they were relieved to see Marian safe.

Ms. Reyes was there too, her face pale with concern. She examined Marian, making sure she was okay.

"What happened?" Ms. Reyes asked, her voice firm but gentle.

Marian looked at her, her eyes filled with fear. "I... I don't know," she stammered. "I was walking along the path, and then I felt a hand on my shoulder. It pulled me towards the lake, and I fell in. I almost drowned."

Ms. Reyes looked at her with concern. "Are you sure you're okay?" she asked.

Marian nodded, but she knew that she wasn't really okay. She was still shaken, still terrified. She had seen something in the lake, something dark and powerful, and she knew that it was real.

Ms. Reyes decided to take them back to the hotel. They were all exhausted, and they needed to rest. But Marian couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. The darkness wasn't gone. It lingered, a cold, hungry presence, waiting.

 

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