Naruto: Sea of Dreams

To me it may be a 5 stars, but I don't want Egoless to fly too much with his fantasy, so I put 4 stars on the writing... It can be better, however it's highly readable and it's an original story. The MC is an OC very well built. For now no incoherences, the changes and adaptation are somewhat realistic. A really good fan fic.

The idea is very nice but I won't lie, there's a whole lotta yapping in this book. And there's barely any dialogue between mc and other people. I've only read up to chapter 10 but this could be a really nice story. All the best.

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