webnovel

My Little Pony- Stardust

This is simply a fan-fic I wrote to deal with my loneliness and denial about the end of my little pony, along with the lack of mlp fan-fics. Also I am a first time author, and English is my second language so my grammar may not be satisfactory. Also I do not own My Little Pony or any of its characters except for my OCs Synopsis: A brony with a dull life dies due to a small accident. Meets with a R.O.B. named John, and agrees to go into the world of MLP to entertain John and his granddaughter Sophia. P.S. uploads will be slow

Fowl_Immortal · TV
Zu wenig Bewertungen
24 Chs

Chapter 2 Great! I start as a baby (Re-written)

{MC pov}

After John's snap, I lost my consciousness. When I awoke, I seem to be floating in who knows where, and the darkness doesn't help either. Also It seems that I am submerged in some slimey liquid, to which, it is kinda comforting strangely enough. Oh wait, I'm an unborn baby aren't I.

*Ding* [Host is correct, you are cur-er-ently a FETUS!] A mechanical voice sounded that sounds an awful lot like Ordis from Warframe.

Max: Sooo, are you my system?

System: [Yes, indeed I am. As you wished I am a system with a shop that is only here to guide you."*Ding* Oh it seems you have a message from my creator.]

Message: It seems that you have made it safely, that is good. Now on to the main point, I may have forgotten to tell you a few things before I snapped you:

1. The shop will only sell items available in that world, like: ingredients or skill books on potions that you actually have to open and read the whole thing to magically get the skill, so no sayain bloodlines or haki. none of that

2. To make things more interesting, you will forget the plot of episodes that contains the main villains. I will let you retain episode one as a freebie.

3. You will get quests at random, and sadly, a few other beings took notice and decided to join the fray. So some of the quests will be from them.

Max: Huh, I don't know should I be happy about this or not. Oh, before I forget, system do you have a name?

System:[No, the system does not have a name, would host like to name the system?]

Max: Yes and your name shall be Ordis.

------------------------------

System --> Ordis: [Acknowledged, thank you host for naming the system.]

*Ding* Ordis- "Hidden quest complete."

[Name the system (hidden)]

1. Rewards: Bigger inventory(3x3x3 --> 5x5x5), 10 bits, 10 SP(shop points)

2. Fail condition: none

3.Penalty: none

-------------------------------

Max: Nice. By the way Ordis, when will I be born?

Ordis: [In about 5 days 1 hour and 30 seconds.]

Max: Alright, Ordis could you put me to sleep and wake me up after I am born?

Ordis: [Affirmative, now putting host in a forcefully induced co-o-oma. I mean a hibernating state.]

---[time skip, out of the womb]---

{ 3rd pov}

"Waa, waa, waa"

The sound of a crying infant sounded out in a hospital room. There is 4 ponies within that room. On a bed, a unicorn mare with white coat and black mane holding her newborn baby. This baby is our MC.

Doctor- "Congratulations, Mrs.Falls, it's a girl."

Mare(mom)- "Look at her. Isn't she adorable, Walter."

Walter Falls(dad)- "She sure is, Niagra, she even have your eyes."

Nurse- "What are you gonna name her?"

Niagra Falls(mom)- "What do you think, Walter?"

Walter- "hmmm, how about Stardust Falls?"

Niagra- "Stardust Falls, it's beautiful."

-----------------[time skip, month out of hospital]{MC pov}-----------------

Max Hills --> Stardust Falls

It has been a boring month. I tried to open the system shop but Ordis said that my level is not high enough, what is worse is that I can't access the main system functions until I am 1 years old, so current quests won't give any xp for me to level up.

Giving up on doing anything with the system for now, I tried to go the typicall "reincarnated baby with powers" route. I tried to train my magic early, only for reality to slap me in the face. I can't start training until I am 3 years old. Also before you go, "But Pumpkin Cake wasn't even an year old when she was introduced and she can use magic." According to Ordis, (Author style: Story bullshit no justsu) Pumpkin had a rare body condition, that causes their magic core to stabilize early. So yeah, unless a pony has said condition they will have to wait till 3 years old at the earliest or have so much magic that the body with forcefully release it causing magic outbursts like Flurryheart except not as dangerous.

This condition affects other race of ponies as well. For example a pegasus baby will be able to fly much earlier, like Pound Cake; or an earth pony baby can be as strong as a 5 year old filly/colt.

So yeah, I have to wait till I am 3 years old before I can do anything magic related. But at least there are system quests I can do, although they're kind of embarrassing for a soul of an 34 year old man but for the sake of getting some SP(shop points) I will do it.

----------------------------------

[Quest]x2

[1. learn to speak]-by R.O.B.

Description: Learn to speak before times up. Bonus- say Mom and Dad cutely

Reward: 10 SP / Bonus: Early access to system functions

Time limit: 11 months

Fail condition: none(R.O.B. note: there is no way you will fail this right.😊)

Penatly: Have an embarrassing secret exposed in the future

[2. The doll is you]- by Sophia

Description: Let your mother dress you in various clothes without resisting.

Reward: 20 SP, your manly dignity gone(but your a girl now though- Sophia)

Fail condition: (Sophia- It is unfailable. You're getting dressed regardless)

------------{Still MC pov}------------

*Sigh* Let's get started.

[end]