This fanfic is very interesting, besides being one of the best that I have read on this and different web platforms.
The only thing I didn't like would be that there are parts in which he only summarizes what happened on certain occasions instead of going into details to feel that the MC is living them.
But in general, this does not negatively affect the plot, nor does it leave gaps in the plot of the novel.
If there is something that was not explained well, the following chapters usually go into detail or mention why the MC did not take such action.
In terms of imagination of plot / character / world building / story pacing / character interaction, it's all done well. Very rarely do you see such a well-crafted fanfic and you can see the effort and planning / time that the author invested in the novel.
The latter would be more of a suggestion than a criticism, that would be that you will use more different points of view, also (POV) of other characters, and not just the general point of view of the MC.
I recommend reading it, for those who see the reviews of the novels before reading them (very smart, they don't know how much time I lost, for not doing that before, on different occasions in the reviews, several people had already pointed out the reason why I ended up stopping reading those novels)
Very few are the fanfics like this one, in which you hope that the next chapter will be updated quickly, and without having the feeling that it is very possible that the author will ruin the plot of the story, just by putting an idea that had the last minute.
Author ...
Please keep up the good work.
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