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My Avatar is broken(On Hold)

Autor: Gredihart
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What is My Avatar is broken(On Hold)

Lesen Sie den Roman My Avatar is broken(On Hold) des Autors Gredihart, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.An avatar is the graphical representation of the user or the user's alter ego or character. An icon or figure representing a particular person in a video game, Internet forum, etc.(credit's to Google-...

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An avatar is the graphical representation of the user or the user's alter ego or character. An icon or figure representing a particular person in a video game, Internet forum, etc.(credit's to Google-sensei) A legendary game Avatar(character) that was supposed to be missing for more than 3years from the game "Neverlasting" was transported to a different world of swords and magic after being logged in by the former player John Smith. What will happen to John Smith in another world now that he is stuck in the body of his old avatar Leon Greed? *I don't own anything that is referenced in this novel, Not Naruto, not Terminator, not Bleach, not Samurai X, not Lemons and etc..

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Gredihart
GredihartAutorGredihart

Took me a lot of courage to write this, so I hope you guys enjoy it. This your typical Overpowered MC being sent to another world. He wasn't sent there to save that world but rather as a reward for helping the God's. As for why he was given such a reward, please read it in the novel itself. Vote if you like it. Thanks.

afresnoza31
afresnoza31Lv4afresnoza31

this is a good read.. unlike any other novels this novel summoned 1 hero from the human faction the 1 hero summed by the goddess.. now who will get the most achievement.. haha

AlwaysReading
AlwaysReadingLv11AlwaysReading

This is definitely worth your time, although there are currently only 5 chapters posted. I hope to see more updates soon. I have high hopes for the future of this story based upon the potential I see within its chapters.

Zenobia
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bigdaddy_D
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Good book. C.

CoolNameGuy
CoolNameGuyLv4CoolNameGuy

Binasa ko palang Nung isang araw tapos nag antay pa ako ng ibang chapter tapos kanikanina pag ka refresh naka on hold na. Taena yan. Come back quickly author and finish what you started. Para sa review: -Good story has a lot of potential -Grammar although not perfect is better than the average -Change character attitude towards girls NO HAREM

ryu_force1
ryu_force1Lv15ryu_force1

I like the stories I just want to give a review. Keep up the good work. Ft fggghf r7chydjdgshfhystuwfistaudysuahdksuduskgagjshkxgkzthGkxhmxhkzrusykxhk .

knight171
knight171Lv5knight171

Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática. Muy buen trabajo y gracias por la gramática.

Iuqsu
IuqsuLv2Iuqsu

Not to bad. Sentences are easy to understand. Over all story is awesome. Author's humor is really funny. Although, he is a little overpowered I find it acceptable as he looks like a guy who would use his Opness for face smacking. Currently at cp 6. Ill be waiting for the next chapters.

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AnActualLivingPoet
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Continue the damn book. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Continue the damn book

Pride_001
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Overall it's a good start, but where's the rest of it??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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