Marvel: Meditation System

1.personally i dont like natasha as (candidate) heroine, 2. i dont like a jerk system (give prank, etc) 3. punishment part make it like a slave system ..........,...................................................,...................................................,........................................

It was fine until the ''selling'' of the meditation system. Medidation is completelty worthless as of chapter 14 and It never will be useful for point gathering ever. He gets about 50points max in a week if I remember correctly. He sold a jet for 10k points. He can sell corpses for 5 points.Corpses of extra grunts. So he has more a way efficient way to gain points. Why is it even called meditation system at this point? He doesn't need to meditate. He is in new york with his superhuman abilities. Zetsu+master spy+stealth so he can just do some robberies or become a murderhobo and gain points way way way way easier. It has no meaning. Killed the passion I had for this. Hate it when author do that and title of the book becomes a scam.

Incredibly well paced fic with an interesting premise and an actually cunning protagonist instead of just another Aizen wannabe. Update rate has been stable till now and I have reason to believe that it'll be the case in the future but the fact that sells it to me is that the power is not just handed to the MC on a silver platter instead, he has to grind for it. So, a pretty interesting read in my opinion.

The writing quality is not great but it is readable... The stability of updates is fine so I rated that pretty high... The Story Development is neither good nor bad to be honest... if you are someone looking for a wild time with wild theories and huge spirals of just random ideas, then the story development is for you... I rated the story development low because there is no reason or rhyme to his choices.... and even if there is, the mc doesn't explain it properly anyway... The Character Design leaves a lot wanting because the author leaves a lot of gaps for us to fill in... he doesn't tell us how Ward feels, he makes us figure it out and that makes no sense to me... As for the background... a badly described marvel background... when writing fanfics, I judge a background by what you add to it besides the cannon, and this adds nothing... I believe it takes away if anything. #JustBeingHonest

The other elements of the story just bend to the main character's plans, there has been no real challenge for the main character no real challenge or no real conflict when everything is 'planned out' by the main character and goes exactly how the main character plans. Examples; 1. The ancient one, even if she couldn't see the main character's future, would still be wary of the main character for being a god's puppet, and she would at the very least demand that he does not harm the Earth, and even then it's a major stretch that she would teach him magic, she would most likely see him as a threat to the earth and eliminate him then and there, just for being connected to a 'patron god'. 2. The whole entire scenario with the black widow is just one whole pile of plot convenience BS, first off SHIELD didn't recruit black widow at all in fact they were hunting her and trying to kill her, and while yes it's entirely possible for SHIELD to try and brainwash her or use her trauma to manipulate her, it's harder because she can know the signs of brainwashing from the red room, and even then the delivery for such a plot development could have gone over a lot better if implemented at a slower pace, not just 'Oh, by the way, I noticed you're still brainwashed, yeah let me just get rid of that brainwashing and then add my own brainwashing to make you 'fall' for me. Now let's mention the main character design, honestly everything the main character does is defined as the typical manipulative, power-hungry fool, that everything just falls into his lap. Honestly, it's probably better if this was a cultivation novel at this point, it's that bad. At least with a cultivation novel, you can use the excuse of 'oh the heavens are smiling upon me' or 'I've been blessed by the heavens'.

sub par novel.. as you can tell by his future plans.. but there is no reason or explanation why. it is just steal, tade info, gain power that is it. and it is a novel with super heavy biased. like those harry potter fanfics where they use "cannon" dumble door except there "cannon" is a super duper evil overlord..lol and they genuinely write it like it is fact...lastly the mc(author) is the type of person who views his point of view as superior, ( how to explain)..example. like say they meet thor who just arrived on earth.. and then they insult and belittle his current actions and personality using some 8th grade logic and there own ' superior point of view' and then thor is like " hey your right" this is the type of novel it is.

It started out very good, but the quality kept dropping. Now I can't read it anymore. The gods keep messing however they want.. The author keeps finding ways to nerf the mc complaining about how he is getting too op which is completely ridiculous since you are the one who made him like that to start with. This story is a very accurate example of how stories get ruined without proper pre-planning.

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Hopefully he goes on to open a company or provate force for himself in the bear future, im liking how your taking wards charecter, he can be someone who is neutral until provoked. Thanks for the story

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The system forced MC to get together with Fl under the threat of heavy stat debuffs and punishment. After receiving a lot of backlash, the author told us to be patient and wait for a reason, and promised that it would be good and worth it. It turns out that the whole thing was done by a bored god who controls the system and tricked MC. Although the author may have thought this was clever, I disagree. The only good advice the author had was to 'drop it if you don't like it', and I agree with this. It's the author's novel and they can do whatever they want with it, but since it wasted my time, I also feel that I can give it the rating I feel it deserves. Goodbye.  ✌️

This story's great.👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I love it. Of all the Grant Ward reincarnation stories out there, this one's hands down the best, the greatest i've read about so far (even if this is only the second one so far). The MC is smart. Has a clear laid out plan of what he wants to do, and what he's gonna do in the future. And the writing 👏👏 bravo.

I enjoy this book give it a try maybe you will aswell. . . .

good start and then goes down hill with every power up and make him super OP he got make the story so boring and predictable the system is good idea, but why is it so easy to get meditation point. i sugest maybe reduce the amount of point he get from meditation. so he not get super Op in the short amount of time. ENGLISH NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE

You said in the description that this would be terrible , for me at least i dont believe this is the case this fic is good and i like the way you started with it Makes it very entertaining I hope you keep with it because im very much enjoying it

The only motivation that MC has is that he's trying to survive because Thanos is coming, yet in my understanding, these conditions with his Nen abilities are like risks. However, even if Thanos do the snap, there's about 50% chance of survival, so isn't it a bit too much with this whole "desperation" thing? I mean, I feel like this is overplaying it because MC doesn't seem like someone who's paranoid enough to go this far to prevent something where he only has a 50% chance of death. He's shown enough bravery, he's fought the Avengers even when he wasn't sure of winning, he's messed up with SHIELD agent even when it was way more riskier, so what's with this whole "desperation" thing, and "neutralizing threats"? Isn't that just hypocrisy? Because who can be more "threatening" than MC? Let's not forget, it's because of him that Ancient One can't see the future, yet she chose to help him instead of eliminating him? It makes no sense whatsoever.

really poor grammar and spelling in this one. the conversations the characters have are really inelegant too, although the story is fast paced enough that it isn't unbearable. still it's a real clunker. if the author went back over his story and read it aloud to proofread it it would be vastly improved.

The story began great, The first 2 "arcs" did fine. When he was imprison and the magic learning arc were by far my favorites. But as soon as we began the avengers arc all went down hill fast. The change in quality and content was so abrupt and grant that it felt like a completely different fic. The character interaction were kinda awful, everyone acted completely out of character (even the MC), the plot took a hard decline with cheap story progression (The mission thing with Widow is something I expect from a comedy/crack fic) the explanation behind this event was somehow worse. The power levels and types were good thought, I enjoy your creativity with Nen and it's conjugation, I also applaud you for giving your character logical weaknesses. Loved the balance, nevertheless my enjoyment of the story kinda died after the magic training, you kept saying that you are going to rewrite the story so you didn't have to fix it right away and I belive this tax your story quite a bit. In my opinion you should have worked a bit more on the overall direction and structure of the story even if it meant a slower pace. Also if you have any sort of negative feeling towards a faction (shield) you have to work around it, instead of just making a "bashing" paragraph every chapter. You made shield too evil and stupidly clumpsy to be believable. You want to destroy it or kill everyone in it, that's fine, but don't try to justify it by making every decision they took cartoonishly evil. (Fury and Colson are supposed to be charismatic and smart, your take on them was everything but)

Started out fine but around chapter 47 is just becomes a rushed wish fulfilment story. Character doesn't have any semblance of pacing himself, he basically doesn't have to meditate after a certain quest which is about where the story starts getting super rushed

A really interesting novel, a really good start, a good " golden finger", more like a Silver finger, to be honest, I really like his first power of choice, it is really versatile, now let's hope the fights scenes are delivered will be even more exiting. now u only need 6 more author.