Madara in the Jujutsu Kaisen World

It's not Madara, it's random, stop making false titles, simply to promote your stories, I think it's falling low, the fun thing about Madara is his personality, without that he isn't Madara

I like the story idea. But the characterisation and the granmar isn’t the best. Honestly it feels like a translated mtl 😂. Still, in my opinion, it would be a whole lot better with better atleast better grammar. The characterisation doesn’t matter as much since it’s a fanfiction, but it would be nice to have it as close as possible to their original version— your choice.

Pretty good, the system is very much op, especially since it seems to allow him to also get the tailed beasts on top of his Madara's powers. It's pretty clear that this is mtl, but it's readable at least; the big problem comes from the fact that every time there is a character on the screen we always need to spend 10 paragraphs describing what that character is thinking about, even if we already know or we can already deduce it from their actions. A character does something -> followed by 10 paragraphs of why he did that and how he is feeling, every time. Almost all of that is also just useless information that don't do anything, sometimes it even gets repeated multiple times in the same chapter. If, let's say a chapter has 1k words (idk if that's true or what the true amount is), then 50% of it is just useless filler words. Even worse when this happen during conversations or interactions, ruining the flow of the story.

Wow i love it. I can't wait for madara to meet the honored one.

Saya sangat menyukai ceritanya. Ceritanya seperti cerita yang dibuat oleh penulis yang sudah mahir dan bukan pemula. Sangat menyenangkan dan mudah juga untuk dipahami

don't bother reading it, author can't even make a novel over hundred of chapter and decide to dropped the novel and make a new one and it keep happen again and again

its good but introducing another power system to a another well established one just diminishes the value of this fic.

If you ever, EVER stop updating this a series of misfortune would occur.Anyways, this is really good. please don't stop. Pwease🥺🥺🥺