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I Told The Stars About You

Autor: Dyanne_
Fantasy Romance
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What is I Told The Stars About You

Lesen Sie den Roman I Told The Stars About You des Autors Dyanne_, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel."Ju Hua, get punished for failing the exam! Punished to face the trials in the human world and find the fallen twin lotus petals!"Ju Hua, a fairy from the sky clan who failed her test to become a flow...

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" Ju Hua, get punished for failing the exam! Punished to face the trials in the human world and find the fallen twin lotus petals!" Ju Hua, a fairy from the sky clan who failed her test to become a flower goddess. her failure makes her have to live in the human world and pretend to be human. As if not enough bad luck had happened to her, Ju Hua discovered that the twin lotus petals were in the royal palace of the mortal realm. at the hands of the cruel and tyrannical emperor, Lan Tian. " your name is Ju Hua?? Ju hua which means camellia? who are you?? flower goddess?" "Why can you.." " if the flower goddess was like you, then no flower would ever bloom again" ... "You..you...Stupid Emperor!!" I told the Stars about you [itsay], a fantasy romance story between a fairy from the sky clan Ju Hua and the tyrannical King Lan Tian. this story was created by Dyanne, please don't comment badly! give your support and suggestions thank you so much, I love you all

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Zetronys
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I liked the story, the only detail is that I thought it was very fast in development, it lacked a contextualization of the world and things like that, otherwise very good

jaymanifesto
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Hello, I’m writing this because I’ve observed that there are some things I noticed while reading your book. I know that English isn’t your first language, so I’ll excuse that. However, if you want people to understand your story, you need to learn the basic rules of grammar so that you can craft a story that captivates your audience. Okay, grammar wise, I am not a fan. There’s a lot of errors in the sentence structure and punctuation that I can’t figure out the central idea of each sentence per paragraph. Story and worldbuilding is good, I can tell that you crafted a world where fairies have to hone their powers (?) or else they’ll have to go through 1,000 years of training. With a few changes to the technical aspects of the writing (grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, pacing), your story would be great and marketable towards young adults (considering a lot of people like fantasy romance). Also, I noted that you used another language in the second chapter, which not everyone in your audience (including me) can understand. Please omit it, or translate it if it is a part of the story. Another thing you can do is indicate somewhere in your paragraph that the character speaks another language. Just keep pushing, I understand English isn’t your first language, but with practice and research, you’d have potential. Keep going! And good luck in your writing journey.

Okwuma
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Wow it’s really filled with fairy tails I even added it to my library because it’s so interesting Check out mine too If it’s good enough then you can add it to your library It’s called she turns glamorous by okwuma

redlady
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I will be honest .The grammar is poor but it can be fixed .More descriptions are needed also. Overall the book has a interesting plot that should not be overlooked because of the mistakes . Author , keep fighting ! You have potential !

Adam_Aksara
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The book is excellent in every aspect. The plot captivates from the get-go, the characters are well-crafted and relatable, and the narrative remains compelling throughout. The story unfolds smoothly and concludes in a satisfying manner. With its immersive reading experience. Sadly, it just 2 chapters.

Knightofthedead
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Fantastic and interesting novel. The story and the writing quality is so fantastic as it never bores me, I really like how the pace of the story is going. Good work!

Eric_Mantswe
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Aside from the grammar mistakes its a pretty good story.

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