Hello! A review for this awesome novel!
Summary: A person transmigrates into an eroge game as an extra(Classmate C). This is an eroge in which there are several yanderes who love the cliche protagonist of the eroge (name - Hans)(indecisive, dense, no confidence etc.). Whenever something major happens in the loop/try, the eroge restarts from the starting point. Classmate C has experienced several thousands? of loops and tries. He had done many efforts in changing the original story but was unsuccessful. However, in the current loop, things have been much different...
If you want to know more, then read the story!
Let's get to reviewing!
[Note: All things written below are because of my personal tastes. Some might not like it.]
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Writing Quality - Writing Quality has been really good if you compare it with the level in web novels. Proper punctuation! Ample Vocabulary! Good Grammar! I might have missed some grammar mistakes as I was too engrossed in the story. (5/5)
Story Development - Story Development is phenomenal. It is not predictable and has some twists and turns. It keeps the readers on the edge and makes them wait for the next chapter. Most of the time I visit the site or app just to check if this novel is updated or not. (5/5)
Character Design - I love the character design for the heroines. They are not one or two dimensional. They have their own feelings and thoughts. When you read their thoughts, you can know that this is synonymous with their characters. I also like the personality of Classmate C. Though, I didn't like him because of his wimpy nature and to push the heroines toward Han(the main character of eroge). But after reading his previous experiences, it is understandable. In the latest chapters, he is beginning to change as well. (5/5)
Updating Stability - Yes, the updating stability for this novel is not the Webnovel usual of 1 chapter per day but I will prefer quality over quantity. Taking 2-5 days for a chapter is fine. I will prefer an interesting and quality chapter twice or thrice a week instead of a messy chapter daily. (5/5)
World Background - This is the thing which currently lacks in the novel. The only thing we know about the world background is that it is a school in which the main cast studies. I will hope for this issue to be sorted out and we can know about the world background smoothly instead of as an info dump. Currently 24 chapters. (2/5)
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You might be wondering why my rating shows (5/5) instead of less due to the world background's rating - (2/5).
That's because this is currently my favourite novel out of all the novels I am following. I want this novel to have my whole support.
An issue that annoys me - It will be helpful if you put the name of the person whose POV is being shown. Like - [Kurokawa's POV]. It's not a big deal but I need to read 2-3 paragraphs to know whose perspective I am reading from.
Also, the author keeps asking to join his discord server, so I guess, join it?
Anyways, keep it up, author! I hope you don't drop it or else........
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Wait a minute, just let me get a whetstone.....
Phew, here it is! Let me get something else too...
Ahh, here is a good old knife...
*Scratch*
*Scratch*
What? Haven't you ever seen a person sharpen a knife, huh?
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What do you mean that I am threatening the author? It's just a normal day-to-day activity. I want to use it for cooking!
Ah, people these days, jumping to conclusions...
