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GoT: The Song of Two Brothers

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That day at Summerhall Rhaella Targaryen birthed two sons

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Chapter 1Well...this wasn't the greatest start...so rewrite

A lot of things I had planned for this story just didn't seem to meld as I wrote these chapters, and a large part of why this wasn't continued was less because I had other projects and more do to with the fact that I simply couldn't get it to work out how I wanted.

But, now that I've taken my step back and looked at everything I've written, I'm able to admit I know where I want to begin with this story, so to the people that read this, know that this story, alongside Aethan, Pokémon, and possibly Lucion will be a focus of mine.

I'm satisfied to say that although the decision to rewrite this story wasn't easy the fact that I've been able to get up to just over seven hundred words already for the rewritten first chapter as opposed to the measly 312 words for what I had written previously for next chapter means it's clearly the better decision. I'm not telling you when to expect the new chapter because everytime I give a time frame expectations, something gets fucked up.

And that's usually me or my phone.

It's especially an issue on my phone since I keep the bulk of my master copies of my story work on my phone, I keep character profiles and story outlines in a physical journey, but my phone has the raw drafts. Like that promise I'd initially made for the Aethan remake? Phone broke, and before that I had ended up with a broken wrist.

Anyways, I'm just going to be up front that the rewrites first 700 or so words will contain certain spoilers, I say because I initially tried to keep some of those details quiet but in so doing some of you posted comments that pissed me off and distracted me from writing. So expect a lot of spoilers there.

One thing that I will tell you could be considered a small spoiler, but I can't think of a better way to end this notification:

"Sometimes the greatest Leaders and Kings, are those who never wanted, asked, or expected to be those in the first place.''

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