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Cultivation Pet Shop

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"What? That chicken is actually a phoenix?" "You're telling me that this dog is a qilin?" "This little lizard is the legendary dragon?" "What kind of weird pet shop is this? When did legendary beasts become so easy to find!" An ordinary looking shop, but what hides inside are legendary cultivation pets. Step inside, but only if you dare. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Come follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/DXHaseoXD Come check out my stream: https://twitch.tv/dxhaseoxd

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: Another world

"Ouch!"

Lin Fan sat up too quickly and slammed his brain on the head of his bed.

As he looked around in a daze, he slowly realized that he was in a room that he had never seen before.

Gradually the pain faded and the memories slowly started to come into his mind.

To put it simple, this was another world, but strangely he had transmigrated into a body with the exact same name and the exact same age. Even their birthdays were the same.

He sorted through his memories until he figured out his new identity.

This world was a world of cultivation, but it was different from a normal world of cultivation since everyone relied on Cultivation Pets to raise their cultivation.

While he was lost deep in thought, there was a sudden knock on his door.

"Wake up you lazy bones or I'll make sure you'll never wake up again!"

There was this tender, but gruff voice that came from outside.

According to his memories, this should be the voice of the little sister of this body, Lin Yue.

Unlike him who was someone without any talent, Lin Yue was a talented Iron Level Three Beast Master with a Iron Level Four Cultivation Pet.

When they were still kids, she had always been shy and hid behind him, but now she had turned much colder. If he had to guess what the reason was, it was probably because she was ashamed of her weak big brother who wasn't even able to cultivate even now.

In the end, he still quickly changed and went downstairs for breakfast.

There he met his parents in this new world. His father in this world called Lin Ao was a gruff, but handsome looking uncle who was sitting at the table eating. His mother called Yue Qingrou in this world was still a beautiful looking young lady with a fine figure, but looked quite tired.

In this world, his dad had been a seeker and his mom had been a pet breeder. They used to run a pet shop together where his dad found pets for his mom to breed and sell. That was until his father took an arrow to the knee which gave him the limp that ended his career and his mother became ill, feeling the effects of illness even now.

Since they were both incapacitated, they could no longer run the shop, so his mother became a stay at home mom and his father had become a labourer, leaving the shop to Lin Fan to give him a stable career since he had no talent for cultivation at all.

Seeing him come down the stairs, his mother set a place at the table for him and brought out his breakfast before saying, "You're still sleeping even though it's this late, hurry up or you'll be late for work. Come and grab some food before you leave though."

His father just flashed him a grin and said, "It's a big day for you today, I heard that the city has been investing in pet shops lately and they're sending a batch of fresh pets for you."

Lin Fan searched his memories and remembered that the local government in their Silver City had announced lately that in order to deal with the rise in beast swarms, they would be supporting all businesses that promoted the growth of Beast Masters, which naturally included pet shops.

When he sat down, he could have sworn that he heard a camera click, but looking around, all he saw was his father eating while reading the newspaper and his little sister coldly glaring at him when he looked at her.

Shaking off the strange feeling he had, he quickly finished off his breakfast since he was curious about the pet shop he ran.

After finishing, he got up and shouted to his mom, "Mom, I'm all done. I'm heading to the pet shop to deal with the new shipment."

As he got up, his little sister also got up and specially went in front of him. When she passed by him, she even flipped her hair into his face before giving a cold snort. While he was a bit annoyed by this, he had to admit that it did smell good.

What he didn't know was that after he had left, his little sister went back to her room and the moment the door closed, the corners of her lips slowly raised.

She took out her phone and on it was a picture of Lin Fan as he was sitting down.

Lin Fan hadn't made a mistake that morning, there really was someone secretly taking photos of him!

Her smile kept growing wider as she said, "Now if only I could keep him here instead of him going to work each day."

On the walls all around her, there were thousands of pictures of Lin Fan posted there, taken over the years.

Not long after Lin Fan had set out, he arrived at his pet shop.

The pet shop wasn't that far away from their house, but it was a pet shop that was set up in the poor part of town, so there usually wasn't much business.

When he arrived, there was a truck and a person standing by it waiting in front of his store.

That person saw him come over and he waved to him, "Sir, are you the owner of this store?"

Lin Fan was surprised to see this person, but he quickly said, "Yes."

"Sir, I'm here to deliver the shipment from the government aid office." After saying this, that person reached out the watch on his hand, "If you could just confirm that you've received the shipment, I can be on my way."

The technology in this world was also quite advanced compared to his previous world. In this world, everything was stored on their personal ID Watch, which included their identification, their wallets, and their bank accounts.

Lin Fan didn't see any problem with this, so he tapped his watch against that man's outstretched watch.

After receiving confirmation, that man went to the back of his truck and took out three cages before saying, "Sir, this is the shipment that you are receiving today, please take care of them." After saying this, he began moving towards the truck to leave.

Lin Fan was stunned the moment he saw the three cages because inside them were a chicken, a dog, and a tiny lizard…

Before the delivery person could make their getaway, Lin Fan quickly grabbed him and asked, "Are you sure that this is the delivery you're supposed to make?"

Seeing Lin Fan question him, the delivery person's eyes filled with disdain, but he still seriously opened up a panel on his wrist watch to show Lin Fan.

"This is the order from the government. Since your pet shop is only a low level pet shop in this lowest grade neighbourhood, therefore you're only entitled to a first grade subsidy. This first grade subsidy is a total of three Iron Level Pets, this Fire Chicken, this Lightning Dog, and this Breeze Lizard, which have all been delivered." There was a trace of disdain in the delivery person's voice.

Lin Fan knew that there was no arguing with him since his shop was indeed quite shabby, so he just agreed with this and sent the delivery person on his way.

After taking the three cages into the shop, he finally got a good look at his own shop.

To describe it with one word, it would be shabby!

Everything in the store looked like it was quite worn out and there wasn't a single thing that seemed new in this store.

It seemed like everything in his new life was designed to make him feel depressed. He had come to a cultivation world, but he couldn't cultivate. He had a store, but it was completely run down. The only thing that was a positive was that he had a loving family...well other than his new little sister it seemed.

While he was wallowing in despair over his new reality, there was a voice that had suddenly rang in his head.

"A suitable host has been found. Currently importing system."

Lin Fan looked up in shock when he heard this. He quickly looked around while shouting, "Hello, is anyone there? What do you mean by host and system?"

There was no response to him for an entire minute before the same voice rang out again.

"Congratulations host, you have been selected by the system to become the best pet shop owner."

"System? Best pet shop owner?"

Lin Fan was confused by everything that was happening.

But soon he reacted and his eyes lit up since the part of him that came from earth finally caught up with this new reality.

System!

He was finally going to get his cheat!

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Volumen 1 :Establishing Fame
Volumen 2 :Spreading Wings
Volumen 3 :New realms
Volumen 4 :Peak of the World

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Hao_Abao
Hao_AbaoLv5
EspersLv6
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I'm sorry to give such a low rating but the author doesn't know what to write. I don't mean grammar, I'm not English and I can understand history very well. He writes without thinking about future or previous chapters, he focuses only on the current story arc. Take for example when the Lin family is kidnapped: The parents are weak and the protagonist has to bow, huh no, plot twist, they are actually much stronger than they show! This is revealed in the future, but then why did the father allow his family to be kidnapped? But it doesn't matter, it's a bad thing but it didn't bring this to the drop, but the exact same thing happens shortly after (shortly after the parents reveal their power), even worse than in the beginning. The protagonist does nothing when his mother and sister are taken away in front of him, despite the fact that the enemy has said he wants them both, making it clear what he wants the two women ... I continued reading to find out the motivation, which marked the drop of the series: "Oh no, because if you intervene, your father will have a block, it doesn't matter if your sister and your mother are violated." (The phrase is not quite like that, but the gist is this. We know that nothing will happen, since the author is not faithful to what he writes and invents things to create plot twists that break the plot). This is why I dropped, but there are a lot of smaller errors, which don't make the story understand. Like the conflict of the two souls within the protagonist, which was not transmitted at all. Conflict? Nothing ever happened between the two souls, it's just a stretch for the growth of the protagonist. The relationships of the characters that come out of nowhere. The fact that the protagonist loves animals (even when he was on earth, written as someone who defended and saved animals), and then makes them die only because they can be brought to life. In short, there are many errors of writing (not English). Besides this is an unoriginal story, I have never read astral pet shop or what it's called, so I don't judge the beginning. I just say that he does not quote but copies many things, such as the character of Momonga (not a quote), the tribulations of the sky / lightning, the examination of the tamers which is identical to two other stories (theory to a very famous one, and practical punching beasts to improve their strength, which you should have already read in another fairly famous story). In short, I do not recommend the story. The rating is not a precise star, a little more (1,8), since it has some nice chapters, but it is not enough for the two stars. I struggled to read up to chapter 300+, as I didn't want to drop until I figured things out, but that chapter is pretty awful.

Mangoguns
MangogunsLv3
Nik_16
Nik_16Lv2

I decided to review this so as to clear some myths. Some idiots who read few initial chapters made some claims about this novel. This is for future readers so that they don't get duped. True this novel is similar to Astral pet store..... about 60-70% similar but not same or exactly similar. Those who haven't read astral pet store don't have to concern themselves with any nonsense and just read this. This novel isn't like other popcorn system novels out there. System isn't OP and helps(or tortures) MC in regards only to pet/pet shop. MC is sensible and not arrogant dickhead. Characters have decent personality. Power system is well defined. World building has some serious potential. Also there are some cliche plots here so though not a perfect but an enjoyable read. Now coming to those who have read Astral pet store. I am currently at chapter 447(reading MTL after chapter 351). If you read this novel for few chapters you may think it is same but it isnt if you read it to the latest chapter i.e. 90. MC's personality here and in astral pet store is quiet different and also his sister. the backstory behind the sibling's relationship is different. The circumstances of their parents is also different and also the family friend, there is no1 in astral pet store. The connections MC has in this novel is different than in Astral pet store, girls here are falling for MC slowly unlike in Astral pet store where we don't have anything of such sorts yet. Now talking about events.... events are similar but in essence different. The exhibition match is different. There is no Momomga in that novel. MC has all together different pets as compared to astral pet store. The relationship between MC and angelina is quite different than their counterparts in astral pet store. Also the extent of Angelina's power, her mobility all these are completely different as in astral pet store. Even the current event of inheritance is entirely different if readers have read though the thing about inheritance is similar. The allies and the enemies MC has are also different. I have mentioned all those things that this novel is different than astral pet store...... One could say this is a fan fic of that novel or inspired from that novel. If you binge read this novel then it will appear to be entirely same but if you read it carefully and give this novel time then you will know that ideas are similar but execution is entirely different. Events are similar but what exactly happens is entirely different. So it doesn't matter if you have read astral pet store or not this novel is a good read. Also the grammar, writing style, narrations is much better in this novel..... Only thing i felt is astral pet store has better and exciting action scenes which this novel lacks but i think that it is just 90 chapters so we might see better action in future....

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