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Good and Evil are two sides of the same coin. Ones act of Kindness to someone might be an act of cruelty to another. ------ Ater found himself in a Novel where the protagonist destroys the world. A ray of light shines upon Ater as he gets an ability that lets him enter novel. He is able to come back with skills and items from the novels.  Ruber had just finished his High School and he found himself inside a game where the world is destroyed by the MC. Ruber gets a cheat system that gives him missions and can get EXP to level up.  Ater and Ruber met and became friends and form the Black Heart and Red Fox Duo which enters novels to get skills and able to level up. The two need to get stronger in order to kill a regressor. -------- What would happen to the Novel Worlds they left? Will they be strong enough to kill a Regressor? Will they be able to keep their friendship forever? ------ The MCs might seem playful and be able to outsmart opponents around the first 30 chapters.(maybe to much) Well read until chapter 30 chapters when things starts to shift. ----- (Warning please prepare yourself for laughing and cries.) (there is involment of gore scenes) (The first 30chapters are long as they have talk most of world view) So give it a try before setting it aside ------ (I am not really an English Native so there might be a lot of errors in the first 15 chapters.) ------ I made this Novel out of my Love for [I Will Kill The Author] by [Night_Crawler619]. Most things might look similar.  I even thought of naming it [We Will Kill The Protagonist]

Yi_Zaha · Fantasie
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40 Chs

THE BLACK RANGER CARLA

I was walking down the streets with a White Dove with small black spots on my shoulder. It was a familier that come out the last time I used 'Dove Wings'. I called her Neir, she seems intelligant and seems to scare that lazy dragon Javier.

Now I am in Northport City walking around the modern organised streets, it has a high middle class economy. The streets, have inns, coffe shops, resturents and other basic commodity shops. 

As I walked past the trafic light, I couldn't help but smile as I saw one of the rangers, I knew her from the long shiney black hair , abyss black eyes, a large bust size, a height of 180cm and a pretty face, that would slap models in the face.

She was wearing dark blue skin jeans which showed of her curves and a complimanting long sleeve top, a black bagpack and had wireless earphones she was Carla the Black Ranger.

I smiled and increased my pace until I reached her, since she was wearing earphones and was 2cm taller than me I tapped her shoulder and her eyes were directed at my hair as she moved them to look at my face and removed one eyephone

"Hi there are you by any chance a student at Northport,"

I said with a warm smile, while Carla looked around and saw that she was the only student around as the rest were mostly adults, and after that she nodded and I smiled before saying,

"Will you please direct me there?"

I could see her eyes scan me all over before she said in an indiferent tone, "Follow me," 

She started walking and put her earphones on, but as a man I couldn't let her just ghost me. I did what only real man can do, and that was taking her left earphone and listen to the sound before singing out the lyrics,

"Stay with me while we leave, Don't worry just believe me, This story will relieve us,♪ "

Don't worry I am good singer, more like the King of Pop himself. Carla just stared at me, with her face showing no emotion, I smiled at her and stopped singing and say,

"Singing and Music are my first and most favorite hobbies,"

"Oh I see,"

Carla just said and started walking again and I thought of making small talk to her and the first I did was say, "By the way my name is Ater Heart "

"Carla"

She just said that in a cold manner and Neir jumped to her as she hold her with both hands and I just shock my head and thought of the system messages I saw before coming into this world.

[ UNDERSTANDING OF NOVEL- MID

CHARACTER ROLE- A NOT INCLUDED PERSON

TRANSFERING ATER HEART

GO- LIVE TILL THE END OF THE FINAL BATTLE]

That was want I saw back in the original world and when I come here things even got worse,

[CURRENT STORY PROGRESS - 60%

FAILURE PENALTY- LOSE EVERYTHING GAINED IN THE NOVEL

NOTE: IF YOU DIE THEN ITS OVER IN BOTH NOVEL AND THE REAL WORLD.

THE RANGERS WILL HAVE A RANK OF 'SS' WITH THE RED AND BLACK RANGER HAVING A RANK OF 'SS+'

THE ALIEN MONSTERS WILL HAVE A RANK OF 'SS+' AND THE MINIONS HAVING A RANK OF 'A'

THE ALIEN GENERALS WILL HAVE A RANK OF A RANK OF 'SSS-' AND THE ALIEN KING WILL HAVE A RANK OF 'SSS+']

My plan was to steal the Pink Ranger's Mopher, but it all went astray, the Pink Ranger got her Morpher in the City Libray, the Morpher was inside a pink case which looked like a book with the title of, 'PINK WINDS SHALL RISE'

I had written this info on paper for me to take the morpher and I just had to have bad luck and be thrown here after 40% was already done. Well if I had took the morpher many upcoming dangers would be prevented, it may have caused butterfly effects but they will be for a greater good.

Well whats done is done, so now I just made a plan B the whole last week and it includes the Black Ranger, I call it, 'Project Butterfly Effects'

----[POV NAR]----

Ater and Carla walked into the College Gates, it looked grand, as at had state of the art classrooms, Ater would talk but Carla would only give short answers which would end the talk, but Ater like a Hero facing a Villian never gave up and the same thing would repeat itself.

Neir flew away as soon as they started moving past some classrooms, Ater had told Carla that he was in class 4 - R, which was a science class and was the class Carla was. Ater was a commercial student and the only science subject he was good at was Math.

As they walked into the classroom, well you could call it was a lecture hall with three colums with rows that would fit 4 people accending upwards. Ater looked around the lecture hall and he started spoting the Rangers sitting next to each other.

The Rangers were sitting on the first colum on the first row, there was the Blue Ranger Charline, she had light brown skin, middle sized curly hair, a charming face and had slender body shape and she wore glasses.

In front of her from the far left was the Yellow Ranger Gerrald, who had pale skin, messy short yellow hair had he had average looks, but looked great than Ater and was 2 metres long and also had glases.

Next to him was a 183 cm black boy with dyed green hair, had a lean muscular body and had a face next level to Gerrald and had an idiotic expression on his face and he was The Green Ranger Godfrey.

Next to Godfrey was the Red Ranger Armson, he was short with a height of 165cm, nicely kept curly brown hair in a quiff, he had white fair skin with an average, lean, muscular body and a stricking face that would attract an girl from just a smile.

Next to Armson was a girl with straight middle sized pink hair that reached her shoulder, she had a petite figure a round face and second only to Carla, in the whole college, She was the Pink Ranger Ashley. Ashley was holding hands with Armson as she leaned on his shoulder. Both Armson and Ashley had lovely smiles on there faces. 

This annoyed both Ater and Carla as they both clicked their tongues at the same time at the sight. Carla walked towards the 3rd colum and went to sit at the back of the class which was the far left, Ater could only follow her as he looked at the lovely Red and Pink Ranger and thought,

'It used to be Carla sitting next to Armson during the first half, and now Ashley is sitting there and the Rangers have distanced themselves from the Black Ranger and now she is slowly breaking down. Its all the work of the Alien King'

Carla sat down and Ater looked at her before saying, "Can I sit here?"

Carla calmly nodded and Ater smiled as looked at her and deceided to have small talk with her,

"So do you always sit back here all alone,"

Carla looked at the other Rangers and said, "I used to with my former friends,"

Ater knew she was talking about the Rangers and nodded before asking, "Do you want to have lunch with me?"

"Sure"

"Can we go home together?"

"Sure"

"Can we study together"

"Sure"

"Can you write my homework and assignments?"

"Sure"

"Can you go on a date with me?"

"No"

Ater just smiled at him being rejected, as Carla just kept her cold and indifferent face. Ater stayed silent for two minutes until the song in the earphone he took away from Carla changed, Ater smiled as it was one of his favorite songs and sang along going,

"I can almost feel you (wa-,wa,)walking in a distance♪"

To his suprize Carla joined going, "But I know its not reality,♪"

And they all sang together, "If you are echoing around, 

Inside these parallel dimensions all along

Know I will found you in my dreams♪"

Ater and Carla looked at each other before laughing, everyone just looked at them and ignored them. Carla felt happy as she found someone who seemed to like music like her.

Carla had been living with Master Ziet ever since she was three, her parents were former Black and Yellow Rangers who died fighting the Alien King and ever since then Carla trained non-stop under Master Ziet strict training.

When she was six years four more children joined her training, Carla played with them but it was more of a forced friendship, but Carla didn't mind much even through the unfair treatment given by Master Ziet who would always increase her training,

As Carla grew older she tend to had grown feelings for a shorty named Armson. Carla didn't know how to express her feelings as she was the quite type and was bad at starting conversions. When they entered collage she would try to be close to Armson who would give her a cold shouder.

It was a month ago that the Pink Ranger Ashley showed up, and seemed to dislike Carla and was Armson's childhood friend. Ashley and Armson started dating three weeks after meeting up and Ashley seemed to have taken her place in the team.

Carla was being outcasted as the 5 Rangers would hung out together and she would be left alone. Even Master Ziet ignored her and she was not called for the past two monster attacks. She had become almost like a shadow Ranger who was only there for name. 

Carla just saw it fit to just stop going with the other Rangers as she had lost the man she loved and her position in the team. Carla started listening to music(Sad songs)and it gave her a sort of carmfort. 

----[ATER POV]----

After laughing a bit we continued the song and Carla even put it on repeat, what can I say its a catchy sad song you need during a hard time.

We were stopped by a chuby man who seemed to have lost his hair on the middle. He had white fair skin and was wearing a brown bussiness suit, he was the principal, everybody was dead silent as se scanned the room and his eyes landed on me and smiled before saying,

"You seemed to have fit in, you got yourself a nice and hardworking student next to you, don't let me down Ater."

"I won't Principal Craigs,"

Everybodies eyes went and me but the Rangers faces were the best to look at, Principal Craigs walked out of the room and Carla said,"To think the Principal praised you, are you that smart?"

I shock my head and said, "He seemed to be praising you, your grades must be beautiful but I guess not much as your face,"

Carla blushed as she looked side ways probably as to hide her face from me, I smiled before asking, 

"Hey, I just met you and this is crazy, But here is my number so call me maybe,"

I handed a phone a had brought in this world as I forgot mine in the real world so I bought one similiar to mine but hars a black cover. Carla just to the phone and added her contact and said with a tint of red on her cheeks,

"It's hard to look right at you baaby, but here is my number, so call me maybe,"

I took the phone and thought of the time I bribed the Principal to praise me indirectly, my real go is to annoy Master Ziet and I knew the rangers would do the job of reporting it to him, I could only smile and thought,

'Starting Project Butterfly Effects'