Shameless Author's review.
This review is motivation for myself and Insight for my readers.
Dear readers,
I'm excited to share with you the premise and key elements of my novel, "Can You Really Survive In America?" (CYRSIA). As an author, I believe in the power of storytelling to introduce readers to new cultures and mythologies while exploring contemporary challenges. This review aims to give you an overview of the story and help you decide if it's the right fit for your reading preferences.
$$Premise and Core Concept
At its heart, CYRSIA revolves around Bayo and his journey in America, intertwined the orishas (Yoruba spirits or gods) with the mystical presence of his ancient self, Enigma X. The concept of Bayo's ancient self is first introduced in Chapter 57, initially serving as an assistant to Bayo. As the story progresses, Enigma X's role deepens:
- After gifting Bayo a grimoire, Enigma X's backstory and details begin to materialize.
- Chapter 104 marks a significant turning point, unveiling crucial insights about Enigma X.
- Following this revelation, Enigma X's arc becomes more prominent in the narrative.
Both supernatural and natural challenges Bayo faces, including his Harvard experience, are intricately tied to Enigma X's existence.
Enigma X plays a unique role in Yoruba mythology as the god of trial and tribulation (a creative adaptation for the story's purposes). His power lies in absorbing or copying other orishas' abilities after passing their trials and tests. Born weak, Enigma X evolves into a formidable entity, reincarnating multiple times to face various challenges (reincarnation is not the main theme and I didn't focus my attention there.)
$$Plot and Character Dynamics
The story primarily focuses on Bayo's trials in America, which are orchestrated by Esu, the trickster god. Everything in Bayo's life, even before his birth, is part of Esu's complex test. The relationship between Esu and Bayo adds layers of intrigue to the narrative, blending modern-day struggles with ancient mythological trials.
Readers will encounter a diverse cast of characters from various nations and backgrounds. These individuals, each with their own goals and motivations, become entangled in Bayo's journey. Be prepared for unexpected alliances and potential betrayals as the story unfolds, reflecting the complexities of survival in America.
$$Cultural Elements and Language
As an author, I've endeavored to introduce readers to Yoruba culture and mythology while exploring the challenges of adapting to life in America. The novel features multiple languages, primarily Yoruba, with some Arabic and other African languages, reflecting the diverse linguistic landscape of the protagonist's experience. To enhance readability, I've included translations:
- In earlier chapters (1-40), translations are contextually explained.
- From chapter 52 onwards, translations are provided in brackets.
- A consistent glossary is maintained after the first 52 chapters.
$$A Note on Authenticity
While I'm not of Yoruba descent, I've done my best to represent the culture respectfully while also portraying the American experience. The initial chapters benefited from input by native Yoruba speakers. Due to the nature of serialized writing, later chapters rely more heavily on research and translation tools. I welcome feedback from readers more familiar with the cultures represented to help improve authenticity.
## What to Expect
CYRSIA is not a conventional webnovel. It's a unique blend of mythology, contemporary challenges, and cultural exploration, all set against the backdrop of the American experience. The title "Can You Really Survive In America?" encapsulates the core question the narrative explores through Bayo's journey.
While I initially planned numerous plot points, I may streamline some to ensure a satisfying and timely conclusion to the story. Expect a narrative that bridges ancient lore with modern challenges, offering insights into both Yoruba mythology and the complexities of navigating life in America.
I invite you to embark on this journey with Bayo and Enigma X. If you're intrigued by new mythologies, complex characters, and a story that questions the nature of survival in a new land, CYRSIA might be the perfect read for you.
Thank you for your interest and support. Happy reading!
