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Abyssal Dark

Avnar, the heir to a flourishing empire, dealt with unbearable loneliness as well as innumerable lies and false truths from his father, the prime senator, and educators during his childhood. This, paired with his incomparable intellect and ability to understand other people, leads him to develop a better understanding of human nature as a whole. As he matures he understands more and more about the world he lives in and the people that inhabit it. The more he ages, the more his hatred and blatant disgust towards the true nature of humanity grows. Can anyone or anything save him from this abyssal dark? Or will he be consumed by his hatred and commence an apocalypse? ——————————————————————————— This story will contain a mana system that I created myself. If I could put a trademark/copyright on it I would because I am pretty proud of it. The /No Harem Sect\ has domain over this novel. There will maybe be a little bit of romance but then again it might not last for long and may be a bit further in the novel. I hate sappy sh*t and if I were to have a love interest for the mc, she would be bada*s and only provide to the merits of the story instead of providing to the demerits. ——————————————————————————— I am quite confident in my grammar and spelling although I may make a mistake or two here and there. Feel free to give comments of tips and pointers or any suggestions you may have. I will read them but there is no guarantee I will use your suggestion. This is my first novel and I will try to do my best. ——————————————————————————— My main inspirations are Supreme Magus by legion20 and The Broken Empire Trilogy by Mark Lawrence. Be sure to check both of those out as they are fantastic examples of good literature that separates itself from common tropes and clichés. ——————————————————————————— Update frequency: For right now, 2 or 3 chapters a week with 2000+ words each (right now on hiatus, sorry about that, life is kicking my ass. I do plan on returning however so stay tuned if you enjoy what you’ve read thus far. 4/9/20). I have a lot of homework and real life stuff I have to deal with on a regular basis. I have a year left of high school and I plan on going to college soon thereafter to get a graduate degree so expect some instability in the schedule for... well... a long a*s time. ——————————————————————————— One last thing——If you don’t like the synopsis or how the mc is turning out or whatever... just leave. I know that sounds harsh but seriously, no one wants to hear your cr*p. If you have constructive criticism that’s fine but if it’s mindless bashing for no reason other than to be outraged then please leave, thank you.

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The Creator’s Guide to Planet Drasylis

(Fair warning that there are some minor spoilers here so if you want to avoid them then skip this auxiliary chapter)

I am the creator of this vast multiverse in which all of you readers find yourselves in. I even created you believe it or not. Anyway, I have nothing much to say as of the current time so I'll leave you with this:

/|-Prophecy of the Nightbringer-|\

Far be it from Planet Drasylis

To produce a terror such as this.

Cataclysm this creature will bring

To us all into eternity.

Nightbringer, to which itself it calls,

Seeks the bliss of the abyssal fall.

The true terminator of sordor,

It longs to destroy the world order.

-Written in iambic meter. Nine syllables each line. There is more to come...

List of all Countries on Drasylis in Order from Most Powerful to Least Powerful:

?.) Empire of Laknia (Empire) EoL

?.) ??? (???) ???

1.) Oligarchy of Arandor (Dictatorship) OoA

2.) Empire of Cercate (Empire) EoC

2.) Kingdom of Dalar (Kingdom) KoD

3.) Sultanate of Sentet (Theocracy) SoS

4.) Commonwealth of Chultat (Communist Dictatorship) CoC

5.) Citystate of Yuzhou (Representative Democracy) CoY

6.) Pirate's Archipelago (Piracy Conglomerate) PC

7.) Spider's Nest (Queendom) SN

8-56.) Warring States (Marquisdoms, Baronetcies, Dukedoms, and Counties) WS

?.)Feel free to comment on any ideas you may have for country names and the type of government they have.

Major and Noteworthy Geographic Features:

<> Visarean Mountains (Chultat, Arandor, Sentet, Laknia)

<> Exyrtil River (Arandor)

<> The Black Sea (Yuzhou, and ???)

<> Millenion Pass (Arandor, Sentet, Laknia)

<> Pass of Fafnel (Pirate's Archipelago, Sentet, Dalar, and Cercate)

<> Cate Desert (Cercate)

<> Signian Mountains (Dalar, Cercate)

<> Unknown Forcefield (Dalar)

Characters So Far:

() Avnar - Main Character

() Prime Senator - Avnar's Father

() Ertinia - Avnar's Childhood Friend

() Senator Talcyx - Ertinia's Father

() Falxen - Commander of the Cruor Maxim

() Fyslenir - Adoptive Grandfather of Selia (Retired Hero of KoD)

() Selia - Granddaughter of Fyslenir

() Leonis - Draconid Interrogator of EoL

Glossary of Words I Created:

|<>|Manacts: Diamond shapes spots of color present on either side of the iris that deals with excess mana expulsion. Real world equivalent would be like an exhaust pipe for a vehicle. Manacts are a great way for determining someone's power through their size and color. In a fight where a person is using the extent of their magical capabilities, their eyes may glow with the color of their manacts as the excess mana is expelled. Oh yea, they look super bada*s.

The Basics of this World's Magic:

This will be a guide to the world in which Avnar lives and will be edited repeatedly through the creation of this novel. Magic and character related info shall be placed here... And maybe some other stuff as well...

?:)?(;?

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