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A Wish to a Will

*My First novel hope it will be good *Will have inconsistent updating because it is more of a passion project *Please Criticise my work as much as possible I want to write a good novel and I am not afraid to edit whole chapters. It would be good if you could explain what I did wrong as well. *It's not a normal sports novel the sport is a made up one *It doesn't take place in our world --------------------------------------------------------------- A man was surrounded by his family and friends. He was clearly on his death bed just on the edge of death 'So.. I guess I am dying.... I wasn't able to complete in the pro league... I tried my best but I simply started too late.. .Fuck I don't want to die I want to live play I wanted to play even more if I just had one more chance just one more damnit.' Just as he died he heard something [Host has been deemed interesting installing system] --------------------------------------------------------------- I hope I wrote a catching enough start I have been reading alot of sports novel with system and wanted to write my own but I just don't have enough experience to be able to write it so I just made a new sport Hope You Enjoy!

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Getting a Second Chance

A man was surrounded by his family and friends. He was clearly on his death bed just on the edge of death

'So.. I guess I am dying.... I wasn't able to complete in the pro league... I tried my best but I simply started too late..

.Fuck I don't want to die I want to live play I wanted to play even more if I just had one more chance just one more damnit.'

Just as he died he heard something

[Host has been deemed interesting installing system]

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'Hmm so this is what the after life is like? It's very dark.' The man was suspended in a strange space

'Hmm I wonder what happens after death I mean is this it?'

Suddenly the man saw a bright light. 'What is this bright light?'.He was the pulled from somewhere and wrapped in cloth

"Congratulations it's a boy"

He was then handed to a woman with fair skin and a beautiful face with platinum blonde hair. 'Damn it what I can't see for fuck sake why is it so bright, also what was that lady talking about'

When he opened his eyes he started crying because he was able to see a face he never expected to see. 'Mom?!! Wait what was that really Mom damn it eyes open.'

'Mom!!! It really is you i must be in heaven but wait why is she so big?'

"Ahh he is so cute my lovely baby."

And when he heard this he understood what happened. 'Did i regress? Also I heard something before dying and it sounded like the system'

"Look ma'am he isn't crying it seems he recognises you."

A few moments later a voice was heard

"How is my child? Let me in !"

A tall man with a darker skin tone was seen standing outside

'Is that dad?'

"Calm down sir your child is alright but he might cry if you speak this loud."

"Ah ok but please i need to see my child."

"Sir please wait first please sterilize your body." The doctor pointed to a room with alot of sprays

The man went inside and came back out after about a minute and then entered

'I am gonna see dad after so long!!'

The door burst open as the man entered

"Honey are you alright how is our son"

"Heheh what do you think would happen you know me there is no way i would let anything happen to either of us."

"Well how is our little boy doing?"

"Hey call him by the name we decided"

"So how is our little Vilko doing Ms. Floryna Nora Andrés"

"He is just fine Mr. Windsor Andrés"

'Sigh, Stop embarrassing yourself mom and dad'

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Later that day

Vilko had just woken up

'Looks like Mom Fell asleep and dad left'

'Hmm ok let's organise things'

'I was on my death bed when I heard a wierd noise and suddenly I was riencarnated '

'Hmm there is not much when you think about it'

'Oh well Focus Vil i have gotten another chance i might, No I will make it to the big league'

'After a week they will install the chip for the system and i will go home

'Ok so first task is to try and get control of my body as much as possible'

'It would be best to start building my magic core aswell'

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1 Week later

'So today is the day I get the system installed'

'For the past week they have been conditioning my body to be able to survive the surgery'

'If I am not wrong the system should have something to do with this regression however I don't understand how it would work. Afterall i don't think we managed to understand the control of time before my death'

Vilko thought for a while as to how his regression could have happened and when the doctor entered he decided to give up. 'I guess it would be best to ask it'

The surgery took two whole hours where Vilko was put to sleep before starting the chip installation.

Vilko slept for the entire day and was taken home the next day. Vilko was woke up from the noise of birds

'hmmmm~ how long did i sleep oh well it doesn't matter'

[Host has become conscious starting collection of data]

[Error, To much data is present in host memories]

[Applying the data collection method for adult brain warning host might feel a unnerving sensation]

'what the hell is this feeling it's i am being drained'

[Sucessful all information has been extracted from the host memories]

'Oh i thought it would take longer. Oh well i guess it's best that it ended quickly'

[Another system has been discovered through host memories. Host is bieng been asked to give permission]

'Another system is it related to the sound i heard at the end of my life, If so I would like to know what happened.'

'Permission granted.'

[Permission has been given establishing connection]

'What the Argh that fucking hurts.'

[21%...33%....45%....48%....60%.....75%.....

87%....99%...100%]

'What the hell something is happening to my body'

[Connection established past information has been added to current body. Physical attributes can not be entirely replicated]

[Notice Nano Machine have been spread throughout user's body]

'What just happened?, I have Nano-machine's in my body?? System explain what is happening!'

[Explanation:- Host has been selected by the system head Ai due to it's need for entertainment]

'what so I have my path controlled get out i don't need help in exchange for control over me'

[Correction the will not control the users choice but rather reward the user for walking towards his dream]

'What there is no way that help is for free

[The user provides much needed entertainment to the system in exchange the system helps the user achieve his dream]

'Shit the system has been programmed to always speak the truth but there is no shot i will be able to trust it right now.'

[The Host has the full capability to get rid of the nanomachines if he so wants but that it might end up killing him]

'Fuck so I can't even get rid of it'

Vilko proceeded to think of many other ways to get rid of the nanomachines however the system explained he would end up dying each time

'Fuck it I am now stuck living this second life potentially controlled by a Ai damn my luck'

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So that's it for the first chapter idk how I did but let's see I still have not gotten a grasp of how to do this yet.

P.S each chapter will be around a thousand words