A Phoenix Rises in the MCU

Hello. Since I've already had to delete a guys reviews twice, I feel like I must clarify my rules here. First of all, unreasonably low reviews will be deleted. Reviews that are belligerent or nasty will be deleted. Reviews that tell lies will be deleted At the time when this guy reviewed my story, I only had three chapters done, so it is much too early to expect a ton of Story Development Character Design, and World Background. These facets actually do exist in my story, so just by them existing at all this early in the process, these should be 5 stars. My writing quality may not be up to the standards of a professional author, but I'm still doing very good, and regarding stability of updates I have uploaded one chapter per day so far. As for why his original three star review was deleted, it contained a lie. He misread something I had wrote and this misquoted me. A lie, whether intentional or not, is still a lie. I messaged him and told him why it was deleted. He, in turn, reviewed me again and right at the top challenged me to delete his comment again while dropping the review down from three stars to two stars. He did not reveal that he'd been deleted for telling a lie, which would imply that I was trying to silence his voice or some nonsense like that. Challenging my to delete his comment again also qualifies as a lie by omission, because it gives those who come upon it a false impression.

weak protagonist, it makes no sense to read this, for those who like op character this is not for you, I don't want to waste my time with some OC with less potential than the spoiled Thor

This looks promising just like Authors other fanfic. There are not a many fanfics with Nate grey. The MC will hopefully soon master his powers and influence MCU in his own way, will Xmen and fantastic four be included? Because right now even Disney is looking for a way to introduce them into MCU after getting them back. It will surely make the story Inrltresting. So let's begin this journey.

To be honest, I don't like the whole controling the clone thing, too me it's too much like slavery, from what I could gather from the marvel universe, Clones did infact have a soul and has there own emotions and will attaches to it, overallI, I like your story, and since you stated the ytotu will give free will back to the clone, I will like it even more, overall I like this story.

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The grammar can be fixed the rest is pretty good. I like the creativity of this. Instead of a system with bla bla bla. This has quite an original idea. I would like to see Clone hope x MC

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Just found this story. Great so far. Cant wait to read more. The world building is great. The MC is good. The updates are consistent. Cant wait to read more.