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I hope some time soon youβll find someone to help you with the grammar in your story-boarding. Itβd be silly of me to offer any kind of service, because youβd undoubtedly never accept, but Iβm sure thereβs several people like me who would do it for free or bare minimum. I enjoy the story and would like for it to read a bit better. I occasionally get snagged on a missing or misspelled word, or an improper phrasing. HOWEVER! I do in fact really enjoy the story and hope you continue to post it for a long time. As of now itβs the sole reason I still use this application Good luck and be well, Tachyon.
The comic started off quite good. It had the potential to be something very brilliant, however I felt there was a lack of story and many meaningless characters were added. The story seems bland as you continue to read, it's quite unique and has some very good parts. This still doesn't change the fact that the story could have been better, I don't want to reveal spoilers if you do want to read, but keep in mind it feels kinda of generic and forced. Aside from that, I hated the main character, he was quite good at the beginning, but it felt he could have been more smarter with his decisions, I also did not like his personality or the thing that he did. He does not quite develop, but the comic makes it seem he does, by the having surprising responses when they see him, which was not very good. This however is only my opinion, it is unique so you may enjoy it, don't take my opinion to heart. Thank you
WΕ₯f is this shΓΕ₯, it's not even 30 percent of what I saw in the novel, a lot of technology and history that appears in the novel was cut, it looks like a poorly done speedrun, I don't know if the studio that made this just wants to get to the novel to being able to reduce the speed, but it doesn't give an excuse for the shΓΕ₯ they did here, I loved the original story, it has its mistakes (a slight patriotism but not much, and other things) but the cuts they made here ruined it, but there are some stories that begin out of nowhere and technologies that appear that have not been introduced before, and in the novel it shows the MC going after them in the apocalyptic world and bringing them to the real world and the reaction that this causes, in this comic there is only a slideshow a summary of the summary, I don't recommend anyone to spend money on this unless they reach the story after the novel ended, since it was left open he defeats a scout ship but not the main one.