DragonRiderOfHell
I love you gave an explanation on the world building at start. Of course, I don't recommend the readers to read it unless they find the need to do so, meaning when they are further in the story. I must confess that the chapters get better as you progress in the story. The author is growing and his style too. Keep it up!
Hi guys... I'm here to tell u that this story is just great and it had a potential to be in top. When I'm reading this story I felt like everything is happening in front of my eyes. Normally when we read we will Just imagine. But making us to feel like we are inside the story is a grt job. And everything about it is grt. Every thing is written with grt consideration. One thing can be sure is the author put a grt effort in it. I recommend u guys to read it if u r fretting whther to read it or not. And u won't regret it reading it.
Though I usually don't read stories which solely focus on the fantasy part, but this one seems interesting. The author has managed to find a way to deliver information to the readers which doesn't make it too overwhelming for them. There aren't many chapters, but I can still tell that the plot was thought thoroughly, as well as the world background and without any doubts, the author has done a good job in these aspects. So far, the story is going good but it could use the touch of some editing in the earlier chapters in regards of sentences at some places. I can see improvement in the last few chapters as compared to the initial ones, but there's always room for more. Persistence is the key! Hope to read more...❤ Good luck with the story 😊 And Congratulations😅🎉
A story with very good potential to be one of the top ones. But it still needs a lot of improvements in grammatic and sentence formation. the author needs to edit it or at least use Grammarly. But a very good light novel, which I liked to read until the current chap and I advise if you like this type of LN then give it a try.
Story is coming along nicely so far. The MC has guts, that's for sure. He's got some *unsaid* power/bloodline which gives it a nice addition to the character. A bit too heavy on the 'no guts no glory' though, he's a farm boy now turned soldier and hasn't gone thru any serious war to have that sort of attitude.
Hehe, I was deciding whether to give a spoiler or not... But I decided against it. I would want you all to read it. This is a wonderful story. I am in love with this story, Believe me, you would love the characters. Well, I'm going to follow this story, who is with me? Give a shout out to our talented Author.
This is honestly the best fantasy I've ever read. After hundreds of fantasy books that I just don't like, this one is the first that I love. The writing is very well done, when you're reading a battle scene, it doesn't feel like you're just reading it, it feels like you're there. If someone is looking for a fantasy book, I'd definitely recommend this one :) Nicely done, Author
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