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Overall, I would say this story is a strong success! My one recommendation would be to try and reread your work before publishing to avoid overuse of some words/phrases. For example, using the term 'snow-white' twice in the same paragraph seems a tad excessive. Consider swapping one to 'glistening white' or something similar. Other than that, a very wonderful piece, Author!
It's a great story, Author with nothing too complications. I like it, honestly and believe this novel would bloom into a beautiful flower if you just follow your path. There's nothing to nitpick about and to be honest, any who does nitpick is simply picking a fight with you. Punch 'em in the face!!! I just hope you don't drop the novel.
The plot is amazing. The way Amelia is fighting to find out the truth as well as trying her best to rule the kingdom is well planned and put forth before the audience. The characters are well portrayed. The writing style is flawless and clear, as well as easy to understand. The story is very intriguing with the author using the right scenes to uphold the mystery. This keeps the readers hooked to the book. Overall, this book is great. Well done author.
Read up to Chapter 11. Story is still at the earlier side of development but even with a small amount of chapters, the Author has managed to weave together an interesting story. Stringing together character interaction and world building in one fell swoop making it a joy to read. Really interested to see how the Story progresses, keep up the good work.
Honest review here. Writing Quality, the word of choice is easy to read, blending nicely to the paragraph, every word vocabulary was chosen to because to make it more sounds cooler but to make it easier for the readers to understand the story flow. (Seriously as a newbie author I am learning here.) Story Development, I like reading a book about royalty so I might be biased from it, so I have no qualm for giving it five stars. Character Design, I like Amelia's characterization, maybe because of a writer's point of view. I could see a lot of materials that can be used in her characteristic. Overall It is a good read, the only downside is, we writers of a slice of life, tend to make things much longer. I guess we need to be flexible so that our readers won't get bored. Nice story author. :)
Wow!! I'm glad I'm the first person to review this novel. The synopsis felt very good. One losing freedom for kingdom and the other losing kingdom for freedom. I felt bad for Asher. Ofc, I understood something bad must have happened to him while reading. But I didn't want my expectations to become true .However,somethings are inevitable. Character design and world background creation is good. The writing style is unique and good. Overall I liked this book. Story development is also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. Keep up the good job author. Curious to know what happens later.