webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Alpha_Medic in Worth Fighting For

Review detail

Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicLv23yrAlpha_Medic

Overall, I would say this story is a strong success! My one recommendation would be to try and reread your work before publishing to avoid overuse of some words/phrases. For example, using the term 'snow-white' twice in the same paragraph seems a tad excessive. Consider swapping one to 'glistening white' or something similar. Other than that, a very wonderful piece, Author!

altalt

Worth Fighting For

zetsubouaichan

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!