OsukaGrande
Okay, writing quality was alright enough to read, but it had a lot of problems. Although since english in the authors third language this is understandable. The stability of the updates are alright as well. Story development wise, well everything is rushed. Rushed, rushed, and even more rushed. He wakes up, gender changes once, gets to lvl 20 something in one chapter and just joins the magic academy for no reason. There everything is rushed and has almost no plot development as well. Kind of sad the author is racist as well, comparing everything to the US and comparing the slums to Africa. Character design, well everyone except for his yandere love interest hates him for being perfect. Doesn't make a lot of sense but alright. World background, he mentions in one chapter and was confusing as well. Im pretty sure the other 3 review so far were paid review or we didn't read the same thing.
the only reason writing quality is so low is due to the fact that the author is polish as such is not completely fluent in English but the premise is amazing the author has done what some people always wanna do he wrote a book that he wanted and he deserves credit for that the story is interesting with some thorough consideration placed into plot characters and mechanics purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn purple flying dragon unicorn
This is a novel with a very high potential... Once the number of chapters slowly start increasing and more people start discovering the novel, I'm sure it will become famous... so far pretty good... though there are only 7 chapters, they are very good.... Just don't stop writing... after all your novel was on the home page of web novel in the encouraging novel section... thanks for the chapters