Review Detail of DaoistOfCreation in World of magic: Vampiric Reincarnation

Okay, writing quality was alright enough to read, but it had a lot of problems. Although since english in the authors third language this is understandable. The stability of the updates are alright as well. Story development wise, well everything is rushed. Rushed, rushed, and even more rushed. He wakes up, gender changes once, gets to lvl 20 something in one chapter and just joins the magic academy for no reason. There everything is rushed and has almost no plot development as well. Kind of sad the author is racist as well, comparing everything to the US and comparing the slums to Africa. Character design, well everyone except for his yandere love interest hates him for being perfect. Doesn't make a lot of sense but alright. World background, he mentions in one chapter and was confusing as well. Im pretty sure the other 3 review so far were paid review or we didn't read the same thing.