Reviews of Wizardry System
Wizardry System
JeffreyDO
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Typical good start and then ****ed up. The Author tried to add mystery and excitement to break up the usual story line (going to NY to find an artifact) and ruined the story after ca. 20 chapters. His original characters are to weak to cary the story, which does not matter that much if you work with cannon characters or events, but is critical to new scenes. I know writing is hard work, but this is cruel to the readers. I am simply disappointed. Maybe fewer chapters would have been a lot better. Tip** for the Author: 1. Fanfiction by deffinition revolves around known characters. Use them to flesh out your story and cover your weaknesses. 2. Reincarnated/Transmigated MCs have an inherent knowledge advantage, use it(ROR, CoS, MMap, Kitchen, secret passages). 3. Rich powerfull MC makes for politics (MC's Dad buying broms without rich/powerfull rivals interfering? No aliances? Duel Club without MC's Dad or Lucius M. interference?) On of the best parts of the HP universe are the political undercurrents. 4. If writing about social situations is not your strong point, copy from the original, that is why it os fanfiction. 5. Strong MC needs his own antagonist/problems unique to him. Thanks for reading, good luck to the author.
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Well there is something I wanna share,author no offense.....well I don't care 1)system sucks it is limiting the growth of mc and mc feel he is getting stronger Well he got pretty much good memory if mc word hard he'll get much power without the help of fucking system 2)author spends 50+ch repeating the same story of 1st yr Hogwarts 20% deviation 3)if only space time power is given to harmione than she will be much more overpowered from the fucking mc 4)I read whole ch+ hoping for something new & all I read mc begging for quest
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Well, it's have a path to harem but maybe max is 5 heroine, it's also quite good, but not OP, more likely Weak to Strong and Moderate Paced, 🤔🤔, last chapter the author dropping all his work, he has talent for this but If this not fun for him, well that's doesn't good either, so all his reason is appropriate. Thanks for this fanfiction Author 🙏🙏🙏
Aku membaca tulisan ini sebelumnya, lalu menjatuhkannya karena penulis tidak memperbaharui lagi. Hari ini aku membacanya lagi dengan harapan penulis akan melanjutkannya seperti penulis lain. Tapi ternya tidak. Kecewa, pasti. Tapi sekali lagi aku berharap penulis akan melanjutkan cerita ini, walaupun karakter Chris tidak sempurna, tapi sangat menarik ketika kita mengikutinya.
