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Wizardry System

JeffreyDO

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LightningCatThief
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Typical good start and then ****ed up. The Author tried to add mystery and excitement to break up the usual story line (going to NY to find an artifact) and ruined the story after ca. 20 chapters. His original characters are to weak to cary the story, which does not matter that much if you work with cannon characters or events, but is critical to new scenes. I know writing is hard work, but this is cruel to the readers. I am simply disappointed. Maybe fewer chapters would have been a lot better. Tip** for the Author: 1. Fanfiction by deffinition revolves around known characters. Use them to flesh out your story and cover your weaknesses. 2. Reincarnated/Transmigated MCs have an inherent knowledge advantage, use it(ROR, CoS, MMap, Kitchen, secret passages). 3. Rich powerfull MC makes for politics (MC's Dad buying broms without rich/powerfull rivals interfering? No aliances? Duel Club without MC's Dad or Lucius M. interference?) On of the best parts of the HP universe are the political undercurrents. 4. If writing about social situations is not your strong point, copy from the original, that is why it os fanfiction. 5. Strong MC needs his own antagonist/problems unique to him. Thanks for reading, good luck to the author.

asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4asaade_ragnarokm

trash the mc is on the side of light who can't kill an enemy who uses killing curse on them, only use non lethal spell on enemy that's trying to kill them

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

The beginning has too much info dumping about the MC's system. Then the MC has an unhealthy interest in getting to know the main cast. It got boring after that and nothing really exciting happens besides fix-it moments. Not a bad story, but not a very interesting one.

Uncultured_PIG
Uncultured_PIGLv4Uncultured_PIG

I almost quit reading half through then I realized that it's getting interesting when you add some unexpected events. And its a good thing that your keeping the story in it's original plot.

ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv4ViciousHandler

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Smokerrrr
SmokerrrrLv2Smokerrrr

Well there is something I wanna share,author no offense.....well I don't care 1)system sucks it is limiting the growth of mc and mc feel he is getting stronger Well he got pretty much good memory if mc word hard he'll get much power without the help of fucking system 2)author spends 50+ch repeating the same story of 1st yr Hogwarts 20% deviation 3)if only space time power is given to harmione than she will be much more overpowered from the fucking mc 4)I read whole ch+ hoping for something new & all I read mc begging for quest

Kirse
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Tbradley_Imhere
Tbradley_ImhereLv4Tbradley_Imhere

Honestly I did not have much expectations but this writing turned out to be really well done and got me hooked on the story and this story is also a system novel which is what I love ❤️!

Christalyn_Beheler
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DaoistZIJh4p
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AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv3AmiOnigase

Sorry this story is so bad.. My head hurt read all this.. What with all this Prometheus and founders test. The MC is to realied to the system.

Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

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Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

If you like Hp novels this is the novel for you!!!!!!If you like Hp novels this is the novel for you!!!!!!If you like Hp novels this is the novel for you!!!!!!If you like Hp novels this is the novel for you!!!!!!

DaoistGgf6Zy
DaoistGgf6ZyLv2DaoistGgf6Zy

this was an interesting concept. It is a shame that it was dropped as the story was starting to gain some traction. I hope whatever you are going through turned out alright.

No_Name_1524
No_Name_1524Lv3No_Name_1524

Well, it's have a path to harem but maybe max is 5 heroine, it's also quite good, but not OP, more likely Weak to Strong and Moderate Paced, 🤔🤔, last chapter the author dropping all his work, he has talent for this but If this not fun for him, well that's doesn't good either, so all his reason is appropriate. Thanks for this fanfiction Author 🙏🙏🙏

msyaifulloh2111
msyaifulloh2111Lv2msyaifulloh2111

Aku membaca tulisan ini sebelumnya, lalu menjatuhkannya karena penulis tidak memperbaharui lagi. Hari ini aku membacanya lagi dengan harapan penulis akan melanjutkannya seperti penulis lain. Tapi ternya tidak. Kecewa, pasti. Tapi sekali lagi aku berharap penulis akan melanjutkan cerita ini, walaupun karakter Chris tidak sempurna, tapi sangat menarik ketika kita mengikutinya.

Akane054
Akane054Lv3Akane054

la historia es interesante sobretodo lo que esconde el libro

12HCL
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Boeira
BoeiraLv4Boeira

It's not the best story, but If you can keep reading It will star to get interesting. The MC still need to develop more, but is going on a good path.

Grumpy_Runo
Grumpy_RunoLv3Grumpy_Runo

Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice but MC has no drive and just a potter head, like he is just living harry potter story but not his new life also pretty no sense he is not having any problem with characteristic of anyone