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Gabriel_Hill4Real

Gabriel_Hill4Real

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I'm an open book. A very annoying one. Read my book 'Out Of Length" and unlock my personality. I swear It's worth it!✌🏿

2021-05-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Posted

    An amazing novel. I do admit, I was confused at the beginning, but as I went on, I started understanding more and more. There are a bunch of typographical errors, but I think the plot of this story makes it hardly noticeable

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    I Fell For Him Accidently
    Urban · Crown_of_Flame
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    "handsome" 😂 I like the way he thinks

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    She is officially my favourite character. Please who again is their mother? Mum who? Her opinion is not valid

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Replied to Mediocre_author

    Thanks for the review. I've returned the favour👍

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    With You In Me
    Realistic · Gabriel_Hill4Real
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Posted

    The very first paragraph of this novel already drew my attention. The writer's grammar is on point. He/she must've really been listening in English class. However, I do believe the chapters are a bit too long to be one chapter. Apart from that, every other thing is perfect. His use of commas is moderate, his paragraphing is okay, and his main character actually has a personality. Good job on this one[img=recommend]

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    The Warrior's Story
    Fantasy · Mediocre_author
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    I love it when the very first paragraph of a novel is so aggressive 😩⛓️

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    The Warrior's Story
    Fantasy · Mediocre_author
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Replied to Meg_Goodhope

    Yesss

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    As much as I hate to admit this, Adanna is right.

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    You had to make the poor dad die!😥💔

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    My leading character literally has the same last name. And his initials are also J.B. This alone is making me read more!

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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  • Gabriel_Hill4Real
    Gabriel_Hill4Real2yr
    Commented

    I love it so far! I still can't get over the fact that people actually answer "Ma" or "Sir" when their parents call them. If I try that my parents will slap me hard.😂

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    Trusted Fairytale
    Realistic · Meg_Goodhope
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