Reviews of With unbroken heart
With unbroken heart
carielove
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NickaidoLv4Nickaido
Good start. The story look promising I think I will added to my collection. The only flaw I can point out is that you don't put more space between your paragraph it's bit jumbled I have hard time reading it, it's the only flaw that I spotted. Overall the storie is great. Keep up
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