Review Detail of Nickaido in With unbroken heart

Item: With unbroken heart
Rating: 4.2

Review detail

NickaidoLv44yrNickaido

Good start. The story look promising I think I will added to my collection. The only flaw I can point out is that you don't put more space between your paragraph it's bit jumbled I have hard time reading it, it's the only flaw that I spotted. Overall the storie is great. Keep up

With unbroken heart

carielove

Liked it!

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carieloveAuthorcarielove

Thank you, promise to work on that....am glad you help me upgrade my novel....I'll do my best

4yr

NickaidoLv4Nickaido

You welcome, don't forget to check mine, The prime. Also you can use Canvas on your phone or Adobe on laptop to make a cover, that will attract more viewers I think.

4yr

NickaidoLv4Nickaido

Check mine: The Prime, more than twenty chapters published and please leave your review.

carielove:Thank you, promise to work on that....am glad you help me upgrade my novel....I'll do my best

4yr

carieloveAuthorcarielove

I have tried changing cover but I couldn't

Nickaido:You welcome, don't forget to check mine, The prime. Also you can use Canvas on your phone or Adobe on laptop to make a cover, that will attract more viewers I think.

4yr

NickaidoLv4Nickaido

Maybe a bug, try to do it on another browser or do it on your phone instead

4yr