Reviews of Why did I become a trap in DxD?

great fanfic, slow development Without too many unrealistic things, it could be better to describe characters, like what clothes they are wearing. Also try to improve the sequel a little bit, things happen a little too fast,I liked the little fight you described, you must have a certain affinity in describing fights, the story is also cool, in general it's an average fanfic, which you can have fun. for your first fanfic it's great

if anyone is reading this I will make 2 things clear 1- I talked to Alstolfo_12 and he allowed me to continue this story for him, I will use the chapters he already wrote but I will make some changes 2- Astolfo asked me to let him know that he probably won't come back, because he's studying Medicine, which took his time I will write a lot of chapters before I start posting at least 30 so I can post and rest normally

Will there be romance/ harem and if so will it be female harem mixed harem or guy harem?

everything is good except the updating stability aaaah it's killing me I'm looking if there is an update almost everyday so is it dropped or what????

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Great story so far love traps overall and having the mc being a one without the story just being fetish writing is really enjoyable, I hope you continue to write in the future.

Hmm I thing it’s noice though I think he should learn his balance breaker before fighting the vampire faction. Other then that it’s really good in my opinion.

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Absolutely amazing but it should be in the fanfic room section not the novel section ‘heads up’ Yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup I