Review Detail of Toph_01 in Why did I become a trap in DxD?

great fanfic, slow development Without too many unrealistic things, it could be better to describe characters, like what clothes they are wearing. Also try to improve the sequel a little bit, things happen a little too fast,I liked the little fight you described, you must have a certain affinity in describing fights, the story is also cool, in general it's an average fanfic, which you can have fun. for your first fanfic it's great