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Reviews of What if Someone got lucky(Onhold)

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What if Someone got lucky(Onhold)

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Tsugihagu
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The writing is not so good and the protagonist is confused and generic. but I think the power to see the future interesting should have more fic with a protagonist with this power

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1000IronBladeHero
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Personally I think its good could use some grammer and spacing improvements but other than that were good here 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌️👍👍👍👍