52 Going on hiatus

With regret, I have to inform you that this novel is going on hiatus. This isn't a surrender, it's a tactical retreat. This is the novel I found the most interesting to write and I have a story I very much want to tell. I even wrote a 10,000-word outline for this. Unfortunately, I made some early mistakes in the plot and fudged the marketing so my plan is to re-release this in the future with some changes. I apologize to anyone who has been following and supporting the novel up to this point. That said, I would appreciate any feedback on how I could improve the novel for the re-release.

How could the novel be better?

Was there anything missing?

Was there too much comedy?

If you enjoyed the comedy, you can take a look at my other two works which are still ongoing:

My Pick Up Artist System

Emperor of Poker

Thank you, everyone.