16 Clearing the Air

So there have been several complaints and questions over the course of this story. I honestly was planning on ignoring them but they keep repeating. I also don't feel like answering them individually so will address them here.

C/Q 1: He seems very immature or like he doesn't really have a plan/ he is letting others tell him what to do too much

A 1: He is not even 14 yet. Of course, he doesn't have a grand plan and is following the advice of others. He is immature cause he is a kid. And he is doing his own thing, but at his own pace. Sure he didn't complain about the training he is put under because he asked for the training. Gods want him to be their champion and he doesn't reject or negotiate? He respects the gods and feels it is an honor.

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C/Q 2: The marriage/engagement with Ororo. Didn't complain about the marriage and accepted it too easily.

A 2: That's a different culture people. Not everyone has full freedom when it comes to their partner. Sometimes, they just have to accept what is given to them. I'm writing about a native Wakandan, not a reincarnator. Although he is a bit of a radical for a Wakandan, he is still one that respects the way of his people. He just follows the older way where the people were able to choose who to worship.

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C/Q 3: His name starts with J instead of T

A 3: I have a J fetish. Kinda. I just like names with J's at the beginning for my protagonist. Rare for me not to do it unless I feel another name really suits them. Also, I stole the name. Red Lion from DC comics. Also, not everyone's name starts with a T. Hell, not even all of them have the apostrophe. Black Panther of WW2 was called Azzuri

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C/Q 4: His power should be greater since he was given power by 4 gods instead of one and they are all stronger than Bast.

A 4: This is his base form, people. This was the side power that he got from the blessings. Their main blessings are much better and different from just the basic upgrade that Bast gives her people through the heart-shaped herb.

Can't think of anything else at the moment. But this is all. Now I need to get back to the other chapter. Need to go to war with some mountain tribes and make him the next Fourth Great

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