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Reviews of Vengeance of the Fallen Magus

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Vengeance of the Fallen Magus

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Sach_Official
Sach_OfficialAuthorSach_Official

Author supporting his own book XD. Remember me? Fellow The Kings Avatar reader? The one who said "Goddess of war Tang Rou" 'before aka the nickname fanboytangrou? Yes, I have been returned! But not as the reader. However, I'm returning as a writer! This is my first book ever. Apologize for the cringy names or crappy grammar or maybe a crappy flow out there. However, I will try my best to improve it day by day! === Release Rate === Chapter release/week : 4-12/week (depending on the reader's hype, could hit more than it). Word Counts: 1.4-1.8k/chapters (sometimes 1k since its pretty straightforward). === Book Information === Pace: Slow burn. Point of view: Third Person Genre: - Main: Fantasy, Action, Superpower. - Secondary: Thriller, Multiracial. === Suitable for you if === - You are the one who wanted a Magus story, but in completely different way that nobody would expect but needed. - You are the one who cherishes your friends/family a lot (Of course this is not some Fairy Tail stuff. I'm not into that!) - You love to see how a MC grows up from the magical defect to the strongest one. === Not suitable for you if === - You hate crew > everything game. - You hate vengeful MC. But regardless the outcome, I believe you will love it!

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Grand_Void_Daoist
Grand_Void_DaoistLv15Grand_Void_Daoist

The story starts of pretty good, but we have only a few chapters to read to make a proper decision. But the character and plot seems to be progression well. Definitely worthy to add to your library.

Sach_Official
Sach_OfficialAuthorSach_Official

[Author Advisory] Sorry for my recent short hiatus. I was busy dealing with my In real life stuff while managing the other book release. Thus, I'm back Q: Will you drop this book? Me: Don't worry, I hate the dropped books too. So you won't see that at me.

Tara_Tang
Tara_TangLv1Tara_Tang

The limited chapters are already inviting and captivating. I think in the future we are gonna know more about MC's past memory and the way he was raised. The plot is progressing well. Looking forward to the update!

Eternal_Demon
Eternal_DemonLv12Eternal_Demon

Revenge story! And Sach has done a great job! You have improved much since you wrote Mortal Dragon. Grammar just needs a little more attention and the sentence structures need a few finishing touches. Overall the story is great, the plot line looks intriguing and well written. Give it a chance, and I think you won't be disappointed. Highly Recommended!

Sach_Official
Sach_OfficialAuthorSach_Official

hi author advisory you may be unable to vote are you? apologizes for that. I have been stumbled into uni and work stuff 😭. I will be back in end of this month, while fixing the stuff. sorry for the away in 2 months behind .

Sach_Official
Sach_OfficialAuthorSach_Official

Alright, I had seen a nasty comment earlier. But IDK why it gets deleted. I want to warn you guys starting from here. This novel has a hybrid timeline plot. Aka past, present, and future mixed together. if you are not a fan of those kinds of the plotline, I would suggest you guys drop it before you regret it. The confusion was intentional, coz we are thinking from Chris's point of view. How he tried to adapt himself with his current him after he had returned to his past self. And as I warned before. It will be a slow-burn story. So, apologizes if some confusion happened in between the first hundred chapters.

Houraji
HourajiLv3Houraji

There are only a handful of chapters available, hence this review might not be covering lot of this story aspect. Nonetheless, I'll still write my thought about it. The plot seemed typical-story you found scattering around the webnovel... about a dragon boy - MC of this story - looking for revenge, since his past was dark full of gloomy ambience. Looks like the mc is your typical harsh, cool-looking boy filled with rage of the past... But no, the mc isn't that kind of person. That what makes this story niche and fresh. I like the magic system in this story. Developing magic-like system, especially creating new languages for the magic to work... it is a tiresome work, but worth it. You should definitely read it for yourself! The only problem I have is that, the limitation of the available chapters, making me wonder about the mc past even more. Not gonna talk about the grammar mistakes, since I do make mistakes in grammar. But, despite those grammar, it's still easy to understand the flow of the story, as the characters seem intriguing to watch their development arc. Keep writing, author. You did yourself a good job with this interesting story ^^

Copper_mask
Copper_maskLv11Copper_mask

Hey, Chris, I am with you on your journey. Follow the MC as he steps towards his goal to become strongest by crushing those who had stopped him earlier. Prepare to be crushed because for this time I will be showing no mercy. Vengeance will be mine......... Sorry Author Can't help but ended up writing this praise for your novel. you have me hooked right now, already waiting for next chapters.

arjunks1000
arjunks1000Lv6arjunks1000

The translation is just above par. I hope that the translation improves. the story is quite good. I like reincarnation/time travel novels....

KottuRoti
KottuRotiLv12KottuRoti

Is this harem cuz i dont like harem? ?

Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10Madyan_wani

Omo this book is lit. Worth reading book. I love the plot and adventure. Poor chris😂will suffer in start. Well, I am not a ml reader but this book is hooking me. Hope the author will continue updating more chappies. More power to you author. Hey you,you there. Grab your popcorn and boost your imagination by reading this.

Zehell2218
Zehell2218Lv12Zehell2218

I don't read male lead but this can be an exception. the synopsis sounds cliche but I know this author will not make a cliche novel. it must be niche! and so, let's start reading to see how wonderful the novel is.

Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfLv13Naz_Mzf

Good works need chances, good luck author. This is a beautiful story from the beginning.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Meri_Sajja
Meri_SajjaLv13Meri_Sajja

Reveal spoiler

KUKORO
KUKOROLv10KUKORO

great novel, i hope we will get mass release, cant wait for more. recommended for everyone!! give it a try and i bet you will love it [img=recommend][img=update]

Van_Theglang86
Van_Theglang86Lv3Van_Theglang86

Good story. Must be saved in my library. Please make much chapters in next. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]