Vampiric detective System

He stood on top of a building looking at the narrow ally below it. his eyes glowed red as he focused his attention ton the two figures that were below [ Vampiric vision has been activated ] His world turned red he was able to see the blood flowing in their bodies. It was clear that one of them was a women and other was a man seemed to be threatening the women as he had pushed the women against the wall of a building. [ Super Hearing has been activated ] Women : " p..please le...let me g....go, ta..ta..take the money please je...just let me go. " Although she wanted to scream at the to of her lungs she couldn't as the man had a knife to her throat. Man: " Hehe how can that be sweetie, there is no way I'm letting you go so easily. After all you see I have plans for you tonight hehehe. " The women had a horrified look on her face as tears started to roll out of her beautiful blue eyes. [ used skill: Dash ] As the women was about to struggle desperately she heard footsteps coming from the front as the ally was dark she could only hear the footsteps and not see who was coming but one thing was clear that the footsteps were very steady and had a calming affect on her as she began to relax. step......step......step......step. Man: " WHO'S THERE. "( asks with vigilance) step......step......step......step The man started to get more nervous as the steps never stopped which showed that the person was likely a " professional " and was not going to back away. Slowly the figure of a man became visible. The man was wearing a suit which looked to be from an ancient Era the suits design was exactly like a certain miles Edgew*rth from a attorney game ( hint hint A*e attorney), except the suit was a mix of black and dark red his necktie was blood read, with a fedora on his head and a red-ish mask on his face he looked handsome even if his face was covered, his long white hair would attract a lot of attention if he walked in public. [ used skill: Bloodlust ] The man was afraid his instincts were telling him to run away as far as he could but his legs were frozen in place he was paralyzed with fear. As the horrifying man approached his fear increased. (This could not be a man it has to be a psychopath) he thought with a pale face. The devil was now standing infront of him he opened his mouth and a very deep voice came out I'm batman (a/n : I had to do it man it just came naturally) ‐----------‐-----------‐-------------------------------------‐-------------- Disclaimer: this story is pure fiction the characters, places etc have no relation to reality we live in so enjoy. ( A/N: OK so let me get this out I am going to try to do a good job on this so I will likely need to do a lot reading, imagination and thinking so it might take some time to upload chapters. I would like to receive constructive criticism to improve my writing and I hope you enjoy this novel.)