_Meggie_
Everything was fine and nicely written but it could have been better since just like the title when it comes to vampire we have a different type of image of them in our mind, like they would be all cool and good-looking and a dark type of environment around them, even not that we would still feel mystical when we read about vampire. Which I didn't really feel here, (sorry you might feel bad but I really gave this review after reading the story) Leaving that Everything else was great so keep on writing![img=recommend]
Okay, this story is good so far!!! I'm really interested in the story and waiting for more !! So I just read all the chapters available and so far the story is really good! Story development: The pace is good! since the first chapter the reader is immersed in the story. The fact that I have already an appreciation of the characters since the beginning is something I like. Writing Quality: There are not many grammatical mistakes, and the story is easy to read! just some chapters are really short. Characters design: I already love the couple ahah. Waiting to read more about the development of their story!. Keep going!!!
Amazing book! it's a five stars for you author!!!. okay I'm not into Vampies or Ping pong but the book hocked me from the very first chapter!!! and I can't drop it till I'm done, can't wait for more chapters. update soon. Tia, is soo cute and yeah, funny. Luca, the handsome vampire is a go too. all the characters interaction is good and the way Tia think is soo funny. I've said much spoilers. anyway reeeeead the book you won't get disappointed!!
I really enjoyed the few chapters I read. The novel has a wonderful flow and it's very easy to understand. There are little to no grammatical errors so the reading process was sooo clean. I really like that even though vampire stories are very common and mostly have the same plot, the author somehow manages to make hers unique and worthwhile. Excellent job! [img=recommend]
Reviewing after reading the latest chapter. I liked everything about the novel- the characters, the writing and ofcourse the storyline. I loved Luca and who he is warm around his teammates. Since, I am fond of vampire novels, it was much more interesting reading. The surroundings can be explained a bit more such as Tia's room. Waiting for more chapters and want to know if the vampires in this plot have only one difference(food), compared to humans.