Author ranting and dialuge stuff

Ok, so I will just say stuff here that most of are in the description. but who reads the description?

oh and am not native in English as you can see in the word above.

anyway, I wanted wholesome in my life, and I found a few good tensura fanfics here that gave me that wholesome. thing is, there were too few of them, none was complete and all were on hiatus.

the good ones were Rimuru x Ciel but non of them was completed, and the best of them stopped at a fucking cliffhanger. and I wanted more, I wanted mainly tensura fanfics since they were better than any romance and/or wholesome manhwa/manga I could find.

I wanted specifically Rimuru x Luminous, but I was going to accept anything half-decent.

problem is: there was no romance between Rimuru and anyone other than Ciel, (of course, not all are, like frozen love) without it being:

A. a harem with no wholesomeness, just lemons (there will be no lemons in this fanfic) and most of the girls are mindless harem girls.

B. too short/lack of story, in that the girl loves Rimuru with no actual reason. no time to develop their romance, and 9/10 times devolves into a harem. 1/10 the 'story' just ends/turns into their small adventures (lemons) till the end. assuming that the other didn't just stop beforehand.

C. skips over they got in love, like in going to another world ones (and most of them are harems. of course) and they do random stuff.

D. for 'Destroyer of all of them' is just bad writing in general.

there are a few good ones of course, but most of them didn't get an upload for over 2 years.

so this is the part where I come in. If there is no wholesome, then I will just make it myself. and I want all of you to do the same. to create tensura fanfics that aren't harems and are wholesome! the ones I want (other than this one) are Rimuru x Hinata. and Rimuru x Shizu. again, no harems. and there must be some story other than they just love him.

ok so other than shit-talking just about every other author in Wattpad, and the reason for this story to be made, what is it about?

simple. while trying to deal with chronic, they fuck up. go back in time, Rimuru and Luminous, that is. they are way weaker than their original version after they go back in time. Rimuru is weaker than when he just reincarnated and Luminous isn't much better off.

they will suffer, they will experience wholesomeness with each other, and they will fix their (mostly Rimuru's) fuck ups. their, and many other Character's emotions would be played with like how a child (me) play with water (them) to make vortexes (their emotional mess).

and just so you know, I have read the LN, not the WN. up to Vol.20 chapter 3. I might have accidentally skipped over some parts and all of the prologue, epilogue, and after parts. let alone everything that I forgot. so help me remember when I forget.

ultra important thing: there will be no uploading schedule and it might just get 1 chapter and never see an update again. but oh well, it doesn't matter.

right, dialogue stuff. forgot about them.

something that is emphasized

"Great Sage talking"

"people talk"

'and think (surprising I know)' most of the time.

(are explanations, or small meta comments as you might have guessed)

[VOTW making the plot happen or a skill name]

{telepathy talking}

A.N\(sometimes might be A.N/) is me, the author talking because the fourth wall is my bitch and I don't need its opinion (:

maybe some others would be added later.

and that's about. fun fact! am writing this at 3 am while having a mid-year exam the day after. and I have barely studied :) (it has ended by now)