Ove1230
I don't get it what the people think when give this novel wannabe 5 star,the structure is a mess, you will confuse between the mc monologue or dialogue between the characters, MC too OP in nonsense manner he is the OP baby in NarutoVerse, till this point the story is meh, you don't believe me? Try read it for the first 3 chapters and voila a headache. Although i appreciate your passion to write something , atleast you need the basics knowledge for it man,1 Star for your passion.
The grammatical errors almost make it completely impossible to read and the story is quite poorly written as well. Now, don't come at me saying "You can't do it better yourself", because I am not interested in writing although I believe I could produce something better than this. Sorry Author, the concept is kind of okay I guess, but you wouldn't be able to make much more than 60 chapters because everything would become extremely repetitive due to our MC literally being a god.