Reviews of Transmigrant in NARUTO world

Pleasure continue this! I love this character's description of chakra and his adventures using it. The story is outstanding with the way the character's plight with chakra is balanced between the pleasure of discovering it and being recognized for it's early usage and the pain of using too much of it too fast. It is clear we have another Shikamaru on our hands with this character's can-do and problem solving proactivity. I wish this character well in the Chunnin Exams and the rest of his academy career.

its interesting...but make this unique IDK..give MC a BS ability for some BS reason...because so far its like most of the other SI-OC fanfics,... suggestion: MC has some OP power?....ex: maybe MC will get a devil fruit as a gift from god???? like that Chinese fanfic? [suggestion: Blood logia?...like all the abilities from dead man wonderland and kekkai sensen on steroids...cause they got to match up with EMS and rinnegan!....all gives user organic manipulation? an then some BS power for awakening???]....MC is smart and isnt some idiot that believes in the will of fire BS....make MC like madara....basically does **** by himself...no team ****,....add some bash,....make MC an anbu and travel the world instead of being in a team?...add some romance and fluff but do build it build PLS...if harem keep it small.

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This is my first attempt to write a story. The stars are what I think of myself at the moment when I've just started this story. I will try to update this regularly. Anyone who likes this later on, I am thankful.