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its interesting...but make this unique IDK..give MC a BS ability for some BS reason...because so far its like most of the other SI-OC fanfics,... suggestion: MC has some OP power?....ex: maybe MC will get a devil fruit as a gift from god???? like that Chinese fanfic? [suggestion: Blood logia?...like all the abilities from dead man wonderland and kekkai sensen on steroids...cause they got to match up with EMS and rinnegan!....all gives user organic manipulation? an then some BS power for awakening???]....MC is smart and isnt some idiot that believes in the will of fire BS....make MC like madara....basically does **** by himself...no team ****,....add some bash,....make MC an anbu and travel the world instead of being in a team?...add some romance and fluff but do build it build PLS...if harem keep it small.

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Transmigrant in NARUTO world

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